Rivertalker - A Better Place
There is a better place in the yearning of my soul,
In the wistful, misty, longing for a realm I've yet to know.
Just beyond those hills, in that land unfound,
There dwells a home toward which I'm bound.
I've seen the smoke of that distant fire,
I've heard the bell from that unseen spire,
I've felt it's beckoning of my heart,
To reach the world of soulful art.
The End
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I had an awesome author guidance written up, but lost it, so apologies for this rushed replacement...Poetry BattleZ ChallengeZ is where you can challenge a person of your choosing to write something of your choosing, in the style of your choosing... and see whether they rise to the challenge or not... I think it will be good way to consider topics or styles you wouldn't think about on your own, and who doesn't like a challenge, eh?
Leave a few branches for anyone as well, just to stop it becoming some sort of stupid clique thing... everyone is welcome.. the more the merrier in fact
Although i doubt i can keep this up.. here is a list of unfinished branches although you'll have to find them yourself!
Amacyver1 - A Comedic Adventure
AnaCristina - Geography
Anyone - Building A House
Anyone - Cooking
Anyone - Economic Hoedown
Anyone - Eggs Side Up
Anyone - Freshly Cut Grass
Anyone - Ice Cream Cones
Anyone - The Dilemma
Anyone - The Black Hole In My Kitchen
Anyone - Mighty Warriors Have Lost For Less
Anyone - For The Love Of A Child
Anyone - Run Freely
Anyone - Of Time And Matter
Anyone - Oh Suh-NAP!!
Anyone - Paintings
Anyone - Parasitic Love
Anyone - People Make Me Crazy
Anyone - The Poptarts Are On Fire
Anyone - Remember To Smile
Anyone - Shadows On The Wall
Anyone - Sometimes Love just Ain't Pretty
Anyone - Street Marks
Anyone - Stupid Questions
Anyone - The Undercover Cop
Arystokrat - Stop Time
Cassandra - Quiet Solitude
Jack Rubyshooby - Dear Santa
Kevichella - The Sad Comedian's Tale
Kevichella - On Vacation
Kevichella - Who Are You?
Livebreathefootball - People Who Snore
Livebreathefootball - Watching Hockey
The_Mist - Dreams Are Made Of This
The_Mist - Killing Friends Just For Fun
The_Mist - The Shadows On The Soul
Moonwalker - Back Then
Nick_B - Some Realities Are Just A Web Site
Pegspoets - Out of the Mist
Sly - Of Higher Expectations
Sly - Nightmares
Tasha_Noble - Psychedelic Trip (A Love Poem)
Tip_Steinbeck - The Perfect Phrase, The Perfect Word
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