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Spring Poetry Tournament '10 Round 1.

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Challenge: Write about a given emotion, telling the reader how it's like to feel that particular emotion. My emotion was agitation.
 
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A hive of bees,
A hornet's nest,
Hunting eagles
Disturb my rest. 
A hammer's song
Plays in my chest,
My heart doesn't know
What my mind thinks best.
My brain is pulled
Up, down, left, right,
Conflicting thoughts,
My mental fight.
Bees sting, Men scream,
I cry, I dream,
Reality
Makes war with me.
My heart does not see
What's good for it,
And society
Won't conform a bit.
My mind knows what
Is happening,
But my heart just won't try
Surrendering.

The End
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