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My Lifemature

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You say that you love me. Your first little girl.

You say that you care about me. Your first daughter.

You say you want to see me. Your little partner.

You say you want to build with me. You little assistant.

You say your sorry. Can I believe you?

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Renee999 My daddy is confusing.
He drinks.
He smokes.
He says he cares.

They just don't add up to " Caring Father Figure "
He might try. Maybe I just don't see it.

These are my real feelings. Please don't say this is stupid. I just needed to get this off of my mind.

Can't tell my mom. She would flip. Maybe I'll show her one day.
updated Feb 7 '10 by Renee999

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"My feelings on my twisted life."

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