Minimal Brair Rose

This is an Experimental Minimal poem that I tried writing.I would love to read your comments on it. Was I successful in conjuring 'that' very image in your head ?

Sea of thorn,
ball of hate,
blowing wind,
closed gate,
graying hair,
parched lips,

Star afar,
ring of fate,
witty ruse,
dirty helm,
lonely tear,

Shining steel,
gleaming blade,
wet brow,
slight swagger,

Brave heart,
heavy boots,
tap tap tap,

Hollow eye,
heavy heart,

Tender lips,


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