Originally posted on Jun 26 2010, Declaration had the summary 'A love poem I greatly enjoyed writing' and its tags were 'declaration', 'love' and 'thoughts and feelings'. I think I either wrote it in fourth form or fifth form (year 10 or 11)
What’s happening? What’s happening?
I’m changed, I’m new,
I only care about one thing being true -
that I’m truly sitting here,
sitting with you
Nothing else matters, nothing else is,
when the breeze blows playfully and catches my hair
then you catch it back and you’re tucking it... wow...
behind my ear... Awe
at the feeling, sensation so strong,
that nothing else matters, since nothing is wrong
And the flight of my hair
meant the flight of my love
and the leap of my heart
as I knew you’d be there
to catch it and care and
cradle it softly, like you hold very gently,
the source of my love. You stole it, my heart,
but I don’t want it back. As long as you have it,
and keep it to treasure, I feel nothing else but
This is not merely some wondrous sensation,
for my heart’s beating out a grand declaration
To feel it’s to say it, to shout it out loud!
I’ve fallen for you
and I wish for a crowd
in front of whom I can release this elation
in case I explode,
since if I exploded, I’d need no abode
and my abode is you and I do need you
I want to be with you.
Home’s where the heart is,
and boy, you’re a mansion!
A luxury, an expansion
on wildest desires and fantasies dreamed
but you’re so much better: life is as it seems
I want you to know that my heart is now yours
and my love for you just seeps out my pores
My life, like the Earth, is revolving,
evolving to orbit my sun,
since you are my sun -
I’d die without you...
Serious intensity flows through our deep passion
and my life’s the model which you choose to fashion