Heaven was a Whisper...
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Heaven was a whisper,
Lost in winds of time,
Just a silent slither,
A mortal myth, a blatant lie.
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Feel free to add to my anti-utopic conjecture. Mine is the ruination of the ideal that perfection can be found, it is the thought that perfection is just a solitary moment, and that in itself contradicts its own meaning - perfection would last longer than that, were it perfection. 5 PARTICIPANTS IN THIS POEM
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