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so dead inside
blood bleeds blue

purple veins
covered with scars

deep enough?
i think not.

push harder,
try harder.

don't break yet,
it's not over yet.

deep enough?
almost.

harder,
start sawing.

now the blood is red.
deep enough?

YES. 

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ohhbby-kylie You're currently reading the poem deep enough?, which was posted on Dec 30, 2009 by ohhbby-kylie.

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