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Last night 'round closing time

she swallowed the salvation salesman

she had found when she was backstroking

in the bottom spittle of a longneck bottle.

For two hours he assured her-- the sheath

of his shiny knife pressed against her backside-

that everything, everything- had gone south

to ^*shit, so she best shut up, buckle up,

and just say @@#@ it 'cause it's just

easy, eeaassyy, eeeasassseeeyyy now,

eeeeaaaasssseeeeyyy now---that way.

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C3Lady "Closing Time" and "The Morning After" are my worst fear poems.
Feel free to add your fear poem if it strikes your fancy (and you want to think about horrible things and try to make them sound like poetry.)

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