an ode to shakespeare

Just highlighting my love and appreactiation for the king of poetry, not so much prose and drama ! Please give me some advice and constructive criticism on how to develop this poem further. Would also appreciate a response from fellow shakespearen folks !!

Baby you've got the keys ohh william william william shakespearse,

every poem i read brings thine eyes to tears

how thou'st sonnets

bring sweat to thy bonnet

and how thou'st ode to summer

will never be a bummer

to thy promiscious drummer.

Life hath changed since thou spoke thine words

but we still have scavenger birds

ohh my dearest william, my beautiful fiend

thou hath given me another bend

to seek thy path to thine end

The End

1 comment about this poem Feed