Just highlighting my love and appreactiation for the king of poetry, not so much prose and drama ! Please give me some advice and constructive criticism on how to develop this poem further. Would also appreciate a response from fellow shakespearen folks !!
Baby you've got the keys ohh william william william shakespearse,
every poem i read brings thine eyes to tears
how thou'st sonnets
bring sweat to thy bonnet
and how thou'st ode to summer
will never be a bummer
to thy promiscious drummer.
Life hath changed since thou spoke thine words
but we still have scavenger birds
ohh my dearest william, my beautiful fiend
thou hath given me another bend
to seek thy path to thine end