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theowiersema

Feedback on a Short Poem

Posted by theowiersema on June 7, 2012

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posted June 7, 2012
I wrote this a couple months ago but just put it up on Protagonize. I was wondering if you guys wouldn't mind taking quick peek at it. I'd really appreciate it.

http://www.protagonize.com/poem/the-leaf-1

It doesn't necessarily follow a certain rhythm or anything but I tried to keep the lines succinct and to the point.

What do you think?

Thanks!
Inconspicious
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Praise posted June 8, 2012
Damn mate!
Thats brilliant, I'm not normally into poetry, but the imagery and personification of the leaf was super effective, (From my humble opinion anyway)
Keep it up!
theowiersema
theowiersema
posted June 8, 2012
@Inconspicious Thanks man! I really appreciate it! :)

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