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nickbGroup Manager

Sneak preview of new story writing form

Posted by nickb on November 30, 2009

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Note posted November 30, 2009
Hey folks,

I'm going to be overhauling forms around the site one by one, and I've got a couple of mockups done of the new story writing form (the first form to be revamped) over on Flickr.

For all of you design hacks out there, I've tried to redesign the form with much-improved usability in mind. Things should be a lot clearer for new users starting to write on the site for the first time, and a lot less clunky for those of you who write regularly.

Feedback is (as usual) welcome, but I don't think I'll be making too many more changes to these - this is more to give you guys an idea of what's coming than anything. :)

Curious? Check out the two versions here:

The all-new writing form:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/nickb/4147508681/

The form with error states:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/nickb/4148267994/

Cheers,
-nick
EloosiveGroup Moderator
Eloosive
Praise posted December 1, 2009
I like it. Like a lot.

Linear -> Standard is a subtle but good move.

"This story is contains mature content" made me giggle.

It looks purty!
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darkliquidGroup Moderator
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posted December 1, 2009
That's quite a change!

Generally I quite like it. Certainly I think the wider (it is wider right?) Text entry is a good thing and the extra help and explanations are good.

Perhaps some of the copy needs some addressing though ;)

Nice work though. Looking forwards to seeing this in action. Is it going to be rolled out to us beta users first for some pre-live feedback or will everyone be getting this as soon as it's done?
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
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posted December 1, 2009
Okay, how did you all get such a good look at it. I couldn't make heads or tails because of how small it was on my screen. *pout* Is this just because I'm not a Flickr user? (Go figure the queen of Microsoft Office couldn't figure it out *gigges*)

:} Elorithryn
Spockeh
Spockeh
posted December 1, 2009
*Views Picture* This is the next greatest invention next to sliced bread! (So my science teacher would say)

Loving every bit of it.
miriamjoywrites
miriamjoywrites
posted December 1, 2009
Looks good, but would it be possible to add indenting on the text box? I find it irritating if I want to copy something I posted on here into Word and I have to reformat it all...

Is it my imagination or has it grown a lot longer that it normally is?
JackerbieGroup Moderator
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posted December 1, 2009
@Elorithryn, there should be a string of buttons on top of the picture. i think the one that says View All Sizes or somesuch in on the right. clicking that will bring up a bunch of magnification options.

(;
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
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posted December 1, 2009
@JackRubashevskiy Nope no buttons. Not at work, not at home.. maybe if I try my hubby's computer (providing I remember later) *grin*

:} Elorithryn
Pumpkin201
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posted December 1, 2009
I have the same problem as Elo ^^^
No buttons, and no way of looking at the picture properly :(
I'm sure it's fabulous, though =D
Rac7helGroup Moderator
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posted December 1, 2009
(You have to log in to see those buttons)

It looks great Nick! I was hoping to see an optional first-chapter-title / whole-story-title distinction... Maybe next time?
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nickbGroup Manager
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Note posted December 1, 2009
Thanks for the comments and feedback, folks!

For those of you having problems seeing the full versions (I think you need to login to Flickr with a Yahoo! account to see the full views), here are a couple of static full-size links:

Writing form
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2587/4147508681_d6cbeebb92_o.jpg

Form w/error states
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2489/4148267994_83e082533a_o.jpg


As to specific questions:

@darkliquid Yup, it's wider (and that's on purpose.) I wanted to make it a little easier to write in, felt too tight before. Also, this allows me to add a couple of options to the editor toolbar that I had to remove previously.

@delorfinde Indenting isn't something you can do automatically with the text editor we use, unfortunately. There should be a toolbar button in the editor allowing you to indent stuff yourself, though. And the form isn't really any longer, just bigger text entry fields and it's a little less compact in order to help new users out a little more. The body text entry field is a bit larger, too.

@Rac7hel That's a bigger change than it looks like, but I'll see what I can do. Might take me a little longer than the first pass at the form to get a change like that made. :)

Cheers,
-nick
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
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posted December 1, 2009
@Rac7hel said:
(You have to log in to see those buttons

Man that's annoying. I have enough account for stuff I don't need any more!
@NickB Those static links take you to a login page, by the way.

I'm jsut going to say, since I know Nick I'm sure they are excellent, especially from what I can see of them. *grin*

:} Elorithryn
nickbGroup Manager
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Note posted December 1, 2009
@Elorithryn Oops, I pasted in the wrong links -- my bad. Should work now. :)
Pumpkin201
Pumpkin201
posted December 1, 2009
It looks great! So much easier than it does now.
I'm liking those tags, Nick. =P
chazpez
chazpez
posted December 1, 2009
It looks really good! I like.

=]
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
Elorithryn Plus
posted December 1, 2009
@nickb Ah yes there we are - and now for my nit picky comment of the day *giggles*

I'm looking at the Error message one and I'm a little confused:
Under Story Type, where it has the litte check box it says "Allow posters in this story to write the next chapter's title" - but the box is not checked YET under Next Chapter it says "Since you've allowed other posters in this story to write their own chapter titles, you'll need to write the next chapter's title too."

1 - Will that error message only appear if the check box is checked?
2 - Would rewording "...other posters in this story to write their own chapter titles..." to "...other posters in this story to write the next chapter title..." make more sense? (it would to me)

:} Elori(e)thryn (do you know how hard it is to not call you Halfy, *grin*) {:
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nickbGroup Manager
nickb Plus
posted December 1, 2009
@Elorithryn LOL, that's just at typo in my mockup. It won't work that way in reality. Nice catch, though. You guys have eyes like hawks!

And I'll muck around with the "next chapter" wording a little as it still confuses me half the time. I really regret adding that option. :p
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
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posted December 1, 2009
@nickb Hey, I'm in Quality Assurance, I have to have attention to detail or I couldn't do my job right. And also being part of quality control, I'll offer my proof reading services for your wording. I'm know for being able to write instructions clearly and concisely. *grin*

:} Elorithryn
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nickbGroup Manager
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Note posted December 3, 2009
@Elorithryn Alrighty, I fixed the checkbox and the wording. Should make a little more sense now. ;)
Amberactuallyritu
Amberactuallyritu
Praise posted December 5, 2009
Bheri Nice ideea(as most typical Indians would say). I like the idea!!!
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