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Untraditional Fictional story - criticism wanted

Untraditional Fictional story - criticism wanted

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posted Jan 29 by QuentinDeabler

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Hi, I wrote this Short Sudden Fictional Story, and I would like some Feedback/criticism with it. It isn't a simple structured storyline, and isn't some simple fantasy story. I need serious criticism with how its looking, especially with my untraditional point of view changes.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-sleeping-game

Thanks!

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