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Smile
http://www.protagonize.com/story/smile-3
Yeah, I'm not really a horror writer, and I'm not looking for any serious feedback (Which is why I'm not posting this in the Critiques Wanted group), but I'd appreciate if you took a look all the same.
So, what'd I miss?