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(And Del's gone for a week too. I think she'll be back Monday?)
:} Elorithryn
Moon
Anyway If you have questions, that lie unanswered post them here and I will collect them for an Epilog of epic proportions... okay not really, but it will probably get posted as a side story like "In Support of Vervell"
:} Elorithryn
1) Sarah, she's the MC after all, but to give her motivation to actually kill something unpleasant would have to happen to someone she cares for.
2) Sharon, you should realize by now the hatrid that's burring in her for her brother.
3) Chester, no he doens't have motivation, but the Gods know how to get under his skin.
4) James, by the end of the month you'll know what he has at stake (if you haven't been reading In Support of Vervell)
5) Jason, he doesn't really want to, after all the man's related even if he's a bastard (and a Jack 'Butt' Hole)
So, who do you think will do it? Who would you like to see do it? I can't garentee my characters (especially the Gods) will want to cooperate, but I"m floundering because James and Sharaon went and got personalities on me and messed up the whole midsection! (aka I've been forced to re-write the downfall of the Fortress.)
:} Elorithryn
Just my two cents :)
Sarah would be a close second, but I agree she would have trouble killing him outright. Someone she loved would have to suffer terribly before she could bring herself to kill, I think.
And I really need to catch up, but I've been having rather a turbulent few days...
NO we really really don't want to know Sharon no no no we don't...
@Moon Yes Sarah can't kill unless she's got a very good cause.
@Del if you're not caught up then Sharon probably isn't prominet to you. Suffice it to say she's Wholawski's sister and she was
likelyhis first victem.Moon :)
(Sharon looked at, erm, um... Sharon...) *grin*
Do you want to know something interesting? The names Sharon and James affect me personally. As you know, my name is Sharon, but what you don't know, is that my Dad's name was James (went by Jimmie.) My brother's name is James (goes by Jim,) and my nephew's name is James (goes by James.) I suspect that their first son, when or if they have one (they already have a 3 month old daughter) will also be James. Jim is one of the brothers I thought were so evil growing up, that it turns out weren't even particularly bad, mostly just annoying and combative.
If you haven't read the blog I posted last night. It's all about how I'm scared to continue and write this.
Though your post here has given me an idea, that could answer one of my blog questions. *grin* Time to tel the hubby I need to dissapear for a bunch of hours on Sunday Afternoon. *grin*
How long is the siege going to last? - not long enough for the General to forcefully get into Sarah's pants.
Will Phoenix show himself to Wholawski? - Of course he will. How could he resist the chance to laugh in Wholowhaski's face when he sees that Phoenix is alive? Seeing Phoenix suddenly might also make the General think he's seeing a ghost, and it puts him off guard just long enough for Sharon (or Sarah, since those two are favoured to kill him) to get a chain around his throat. Phoenix can then help her drag him down to the dungeons where she can personally torture him.
Will he risk everything to get inside and be with Sarah? - Of course. He would die for Sarah.
And if he does, will Wholawski catch them and torture them? - Sarah is already in his custody, but if Phoenix shows up before the General hurts her, then no, he won't get the chance to capture or torture Phoenix as well as Sarah.
What about Ryan, how much of a part will he play? (I know we'd all like him to keep out of harm's way, but I know the Gods have plans for the boy. - My thinking is that the Gods get Ryan into the room with the Princess, Sarah and the other ladies. He will tell Sarah of Jason's plans, and where to be, at what time, to capture Wholawaski.
Who gets to kill Wholawski? - My hope is Sharon.
Will York get a chance to possess his brother, Chester's, body? - Yes, that would be a lovely twist. Since York repented just before he died, perhaps he possesses Chester just before he's about to kill Sarah and / or Jason. York stays Chester's hand, and is himself killed. He then goes to be with his brother in death.
And how are we going to get Lady Miriam out of the dungeon? - Jason and Sarah rescue her after the General is captured or killed.
Will I ever get a chance to translate the God mixed up message she was shouting when Sarah first saw her? - Of course you will. She will regain her senses just as she is freed. Perhaps her message had to do with Ryan coming to give Sarah Phoenix's plan?
You made the questionable mistake of asking for an opinion about your dilemmas, Elo. You should know by now that I'm always willing to give an opinion about everything.