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ElorithrynGroup Moderator

To Readers of Elo's Phoenixes of Vervell - Sarah's Phoenix & Phoenix Rising

Posted by Elorithryn on February 15, 2011

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ElorithrynGroup Moderator
Elorithryn Plus
posted July 28, 2011
Well at least some one is listening *grin* I'ts been so quiet with you gone Spook!

(And Del's gone for a week too. I think she'll be back Monday?)

:} Elorithryn
moonwalker
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posted July 28, 2011
I'd say yes, too.
Moon
SpookOfNight
SpookOfNight
posted July 28, 2011
Quiet? It's always quiet when I'm not around to stir up a ruckus ;)
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
Elorithryn Plus
posted July 28, 2011
*snickers* Yes I suppose that might be why...

Anyway If you have questions, that lie unanswered post them here and I will collect them for an Epilog of epic proportions... okay not really, but it will probably get posted as a side story like "In Support of Vervell"

:} Elorithryn
SpookOfNight
SpookOfNight
posted July 28, 2011
Woohoo! :D
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
Elorithryn Plus
posted September 14, 2011
Okay I have a poll to ask of You My fans. It is time for Wholwaski to die. I think we all agree upon that. But the question is Who shall get the honor of killing him?

1) Sarah, she's the MC after all, but to give her motivation to actually kill something unpleasant would have to happen to someone she cares for.
2) Sharon, you should realize by now the hatrid that's burring in her for her brother.
3) Chester, no he doens't have motivation, but the Gods know how to get under his skin.
4) James, by the end of the month you'll know what he has at stake (if you haven't been reading In Support of Vervell)
5) Jason, he doesn't really want to, after all the man's related even if he's a bastard (and a Jack 'Butt' Hole)

So, who do you think will do it? Who would you like to see do it? I can't garentee my characters (especially the Gods) will want to cooperate, but I"m floundering because James and Sharaon went and got personalities on me and messed up the whole midsection! (aka I've been forced to re-write the downfall of the Fortress.)

:} Elorithryn
SpookOfNight
SpookOfNight
posted September 14, 2011
I vote Sharon or Sarah, depending which way your plot pans out. They seem more likely to do so, and their motives would probably be clearer - Sharons are obvious, and Sarah is technically on a mission that will help to bring him down, so y'know...

Just my two cents :)
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
Elorithryn Plus
posted September 14, 2011
I guess it just depends on how long you want him to suffer eh? *snicekrs*
SpookOfNight
SpookOfNight
posted September 14, 2011
Haha, true true. But you know my thoughts on that *sniggers*
miriamjoywrites
miriamjoywrites
posted September 14, 2011
Ooooh I don't know ....
moonwalker
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posted September 14, 2011
I vote Sharon, on the premise that he took her viginity in a rape scenario when she was 13 - she hasn't felt clean since - just a thought. It would give her plenty of motivation though, wouldn't it?

Sarah would be a close second, but I agree she would have trouble killing him outright. Someone she loved would have to suffer terribly before she could bring herself to kill, I think.
miriamjoywrites
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posted September 14, 2011
I can't remember who Sharon is and I'm very behind, but I agree with what Moon says about Sarah?

And I really need to catch up, but I've been having rather a turbulent few days...
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
Elorithryn Plus
posted September 14, 2011
(Sharon raises her eyeborws at Moon - You think he waited that long?)
NO we really really don't want to know Sharon no no no we don't...

@Moon Yes Sarah can't kill unless she's got a very good cause.

@Del if you're not caught up then Sharon probably isn't prominet to you. Suffice it to say she's Wholawski's sister and she was likely his first victem.
moonwalker
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posted September 14, 2011
Your comment between Moon and Sharon made me smile - it almost made me feel schizophrenic - or at least with a duel personality.

Moon :)
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
Elorithryn Plus
posted September 14, 2011
*giggles* It did certainly feel like that even from my perspective, and I nearly wrote
(Sharon looked at, erm, um... Sharon...) *grin*
miriamjoywrites
miriamjoywrites
posted September 15, 2011
I think Sharon then. Although I don't know entirely the situation, I reckon Sarah should sort of be the catalyst for it - the thing that finally pushes Sharon into doing it. That way Sarah gets her revenge in a way, without feeling guilty and without having to bring herself to do it....
moonwalker
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posted September 15, 2011
I agree with Del - Sarah would really take it to heart if she was forced to kill someone not in battle. She would feel it was murder, even if the man richly deserves to be hung by his dick till it fell off! *Ooops, Sorry. My Sharon Personality took over unexpectedly. Talking about her brother brings her out, and she becomes the dominent personality. I can't control her, sometimes.*

Do you want to know something interesting? The names Sharon and James affect me personally. As you know, my name is Sharon, but what you don't know, is that my Dad's name was James (went by Jimmie.) My brother's name is James (goes by Jim,) and my nephew's name is James (goes by James.) I suspect that their first son, when or if they have one (they already have a 3 month old daughter) will also be James. Jim is one of the brothers I thought were so evil growing up, that it turns out weren't even particularly bad, mostly just annoying and combative.
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
Elorithryn Plus
posted September 15, 2011
(Well it ain't just Sarah - Sharon smiles - it's they rest of the folks that came with her. The *elo shuses her* Oh right you haven't posted that chapter yet. - Sharon smiles and goes back to her business of ordering the servants about the kitchen.)

If you haven't read the blog I posted last night. It's all about how I'm scared to continue and write this.

Though your post here has given me an idea, that could answer one of my blog questions. *grin* Time to tel the hubby I need to dissapear for a bunch of hours on Sunday Afternoon. *grin*
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
Elorithryn Plus
posted September 15, 2011
@moonwalker said:
Do you want to know something interesting? The names Sharon and James affect me personally.
James is the name of my second boyfriend, whom I dates for one month shy of two years. Were were, you could say high school sweethearts, though he was in college when I met him. Anyway, people thought we were going to get married (as highschoolers tend to do) So the name James also has personal meaning to me, even if James is nothing like my xbf Jamie...
moonwalker
moonwalker Plus
posted September 15, 2011
Here are some answers I came up with for the dilemma on your blog. You may take them seriously or not, as you wish.

How long is the siege going to last? - not long enough for the General to forcefully get into Sarah's pants.

Will Phoenix show himself to Wholawski? - Of course he will. How could he resist the chance to laugh in Wholowhaski's face when he sees that Phoenix is alive? Seeing Phoenix suddenly might also make the General think he's seeing a ghost, and it puts him off guard just long enough for Sharon (or Sarah, since those two are favoured to kill him) to get a chain around his throat. Phoenix can then help her drag him down to the dungeons where she can personally torture him.

Will he risk everything to get inside and be with Sarah? - Of course. He would die for Sarah.

And if he does, will Wholawski catch them and torture them? - Sarah is already in his custody, but if Phoenix shows up before the General hurts her, then no, he won't get the chance to capture or torture Phoenix as well as Sarah.

What about Ryan, how much of a part will he play? (I know we'd all like him to keep out of harm's way, but I know the Gods have plans for the boy. - My thinking is that the Gods get Ryan into the room with the Princess, Sarah and the other ladies. He will tell Sarah of Jason's plans, and where to be, at what time, to capture Wholawaski.

Who gets to kill Wholawski? - My hope is Sharon.

Will York get a chance to possess his brother, Chester's, body? - Yes, that would be a lovely twist. Since York repented just before he died, perhaps he possesses Chester just before he's about to kill Sarah and / or Jason. York stays Chester's hand, and is himself killed. He then goes to be with his brother in death.

And how are we going to get Lady Miriam out of the dungeon? - Jason and Sarah rescue her after the General is captured or killed.

Will I ever get a chance to translate the God mixed up message she was shouting when Sarah first saw her? - Of course you will. She will regain her senses just as she is freed. Perhaps her message had to do with Ryan coming to give Sarah Phoenix's plan?

You made the questionable mistake of asking for an opinion about your dilemmas, Elo. You should know by now that I'm always willing to give an opinion about everything.
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