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ElorithrynGroup Moderator

To Readers of Elo's Phoenixes of Vervell - Sarah's Phoenix & Phoenix Rising

Posted by Elorithryn on February 15, 2011

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SpookOfNight
SpookOfNight
posted February 20, 2012
I'm overhauling the WHOLE THING! (premise, settting, culture, several names, the lot!) hee hee. I'll get the first one to you when it's done, then use suggestions to work on the second and so on.

They're all pretty rubbish plot-wise in their current form .. and don't get me started on some of the grammar *shudders* Neh, I'll fix it in the rewrites xP
miriamjoywrites
miriamjoywrites
posted February 20, 2012
Lol, my 'send me all three' was directed at Elo but you got in there before my comment sent! But that sounds fine. Especially since I go on study leave on the 11th May and after that it's just exams and then SUPER LONG SUMMER YAYYYYYY!.
SpookOfNight
SpookOfNight
posted February 20, 2012
DERP! *facepalm* Sorry. Egotistical slant on comment reading xP

Hehe, I'll be lucky if I can get started before the summer. AS exams are eating my brain. But at least I'll be at liberty all summer to write! New house, and probably a lot of reading to do, but still! Summer! Long! Rewrite time! *grins*
miriamjoywrites
miriamjoywrites
posted February 20, 2012
New house, exciting times. Ah, well. Your summer is from beginning of July, isn't it? And I'm off mid-June so I'll have time to finish editing Returning if I haven't done it by then which I probably won't have done before I get stuck in. Wow. No commas in that sentence.

New house, fun times! I've only moved once and I was a baby, can't remember it at all. I don't think I'd be able to cope, it'd be weird. I've lived here SO LONG.
SpookOfNight
SpookOfNight
posted February 20, 2012
Hehe, oh yeah. For the sixteenth time. It's our shortest move ever though - to Warminster, about an hour down the road. And hte new house has a fireplace, so I can burn all my old GCSE stuff ... and all my Spanish too, this summer. Oh, how I look forward to that *cackles*

Hehe, see, for me, it woule be weird NOT moving. Though hopefully this will be my last move before I go off to uni et al :)
miriamjoywrites
miriamjoywrites
posted February 20, 2012
We should so meet up in the summer.
SpookOfNight
SpookOfNight
posted February 20, 2012
I concur! I'm feeling brave enough to ask my parents now they know about everything too :)
miriamjoywrites
miriamjoywrites
posted February 20, 2012
YAYYYYYYY!
My parents actually suggested you come and stay with me. So, what you waiting for?
SpookOfNight
SpookOfNight
posted February 20, 2012
Nothing - I'm going to ask me momma in ze mornin' methinks. Or when I see her at Easter ... or in an email .... whenever i get arond to it between these large essays. I would ask at exeat, but I'm going to Paris, so ... xP
miriamjoywrites
miriamjoywrites
posted February 20, 2012
YAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYYYYYYY!
SpookOfNight
SpookOfNight
posted February 20, 2012
Lol, you're so adorably exciteable right now xD
Hmmmm ... but what sort of meeting would it be? Meet up for the day, or do I stay over or .... whatever you / your family is cool with :)

Also, I'm going to bed now. Goodnight!
miriamjoywrites
miriamjoywrites
posted February 20, 2012
I KNOW!
Stay over! Definitely! I would tidy my room and everything (wow, there's a promise). We're all quite normal. Okay, that's a lie, my dad sings a lot.

Night!
moonwalker
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posted February 20, 2012
I'm rooting for the both of you from across the pond. You're the same age, right? You're obviously great friends already.
miriamjoywrites
miriamjoywrites
posted February 21, 2012
Spook's birthday is the May before my January, so she's in the school year above me, but at the moment we're the same age ;)
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
Elorithryn Plus
posted February 21, 2012
Hope that stay over works out well... And of course if any of you (and i"m talking all my dedicated Phoenix fans here) are ever in my neck of the woods don't hesitate to let me know. :}

But back to Del. I'll send you the last two books, as yes, the first one is getting a major rewrite. They'll be sans and editing that's been done on P-tag, so I wouldn't focus on grammar and such at this stage. Right now my goal is to hammer down the plot and discern any places where additional explanation is needed.

*huggles*

Don't forget to send me Watching by March 1st, so I can do a comprehensive edit like I did for the one chapter. :}
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
Elorithryn Plus
posted May 17, 2012
Poke Poke Poke! Guess what vervell has made the news! It's been published... Okay not the Phoenix Trilogy that needs work. But one of the little shorts I wrote, this one staring Prince Dememtrioso is now available on the Kindle... Coolies huh?

Anyway a link to the US copy, I'll try to add other's as well later, if I can remember... *SQUEALS!*
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miriamjoywrites
miriamjoywrites
posted May 17, 2012
YAY!
But unfortunately I am too skint to buy it :(
BUT NEVER MIND YAY.
SpookOfNight
SpookOfNight
posted May 18, 2012
COMMENCE THE DEMENTED HAPPY DANCE! xD

Wheeooo, well done Elo! :D
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
Elorithryn Plus
posted May 18, 2012
I don't expect either of you to buy it. :} After all your both still students. Worse your not even University students yet! *giggles* No wait being a Uni student is worse on the not having money aspect...

Anyway I'm still waiting for your quadruple threat novel debut. :}
moonwalker
moonwalker Plus
posted May 18, 2012
Many congrats, Elo. Whoooohoooooo!

Wasn't this story on here awhile ago? I remember reading it, anyway. It was excellent. It had to do with the prince pretending to be a pauper for one day, and he learned some valuable lessons about humility and privilege.

Question: How do you go about publishing short stories?
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