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To Readers of Elo's Phoenixes of Vervell - Sarah's Phoenix & Phoenix Rising

To Readers of Elo's Phoenixes of Vervell - Sarah's Phoenix & Phoenix Rising
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This goo gun really does worry me rather.
(And us ~ a crew of concerned characters poke their heads around the door of Del's room)
(It should - several of Spook's characters state from their Bunker of Almost-Impenetrable Safety. Some of them look to have suffered a recent goo-ing)

I'm bored. They should know to run faster xD
When I'm bored, I pull pranks on people... well, I guess it's better than explosions. Although my conversations with George would indicate otherwise (think back to our conversations about who he's saved as on my phone...), ha ha!

I haven't written anything for a couple of days. I think they're all enjoying the rest. When I can see properly again, I'll get up to some reading.
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GUESS WHAT!?!?!

No I'm not done editing but I'm, sooooo super close!

That's right only two chapters left to edit.

And Spook, you know what I'm editing...

That's right the wedding!

SQUEEEEEEE!

*giggles* Adorably Excitable... Well I know i"m excitable, I"ll let you guys tell me if I'm adorable or not. :}
So there's only two chapters left in the whole story? Yaaaaay. Wait a minute. Is Jason going to want to marry Sarah after she beats the crap out of him on the training ground?
Awwww! :D
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@Moon Two chapters left to Edit. There will be 152 Chapters total posted, so you've got...


Ten Chapters left, including todays (which I will be posting shortly).

And Yes, Jason will still marry Sarah. It'll take a lot more than a spat to break those two apart. *giggles*

(After all - Jason gets this grin that makes Elo feel all melty - I've been dreaming of marring her for years now, I can't just walk away from that. The impossible has become possible!)

And if a Pauper can become a King *grin* Anything is possible!
(and yes that's a Vervellean saying *giggles*)
Lol, I'm SO BEHIND. If you could send me a word doc, Elo, I'll catch up on my Kindle - I'm about 50 Protag chapters behind and can't see myself catching up any time soon.
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@Del he he.... I should have those last two chapters edited by the end of the week if not sonner, then I can send them to you and you can tell me what Kindle does with table of contents, as well as catch all the mistakes I've probably already corrected on Protagonize... :} (I do light editing as part of the the posting process)
*Spook runs about in demented circles getting all excited*
SQUEEEEEEEE! Alright, where did the Skathains go? I need to tell them to kick it up into party mode in here *grins*
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ROFL to bad they didn't all get ported, I think the Temple would be stretched to it limits... Not to mention the city of Verdas would feel as though it'd been invaded.

(by Vikings! - Sarah falls over in a fit of laughter...)
Um right... don't mind her I think she just dove off the deep end... She'll be back with us shortly... :}
(Sounds like her deep end was more fun that mine! - Gwyn looks rather peturbed - And I'm not a Viking ... until Spook does the rewrite. We do go rather more Viking like if her plans all go right ... dammit)

That would have been both awesome and terrifying. Skathains know how to party, but a city full of drunk ones ... oh dear *giggles*
That sounds great Elo! Want me to get my friend Sherlock to look at it too? *grin*

(And perhaps Holly, and Spock, and the Master.... Spook knows what I'm talking about, ha ha)
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(Sarah composes herself and give Gwythryn a big hug - Awe. Vikings are awesome! You should take that as a compelment.)

Yes I think they might be kicked to outside of the gates... Say one Scout troop per Skathian to get the really drunk ones out of Verdas? *giggles*

And Rin I think you'd make a superbly awesome viking (red hair and all)! :} *hugs*
Hey... now my lot are telling me they want to be Vikings.

And I'm actually considering letting them. Well, Bronwyn. She's generally right about stuff. Give her her head, I say - she'll take it to interesting places!
(Gywn nods approvingly - Does this mean I have to wear one of those daft hats though?)

Ooh, now I'm getting ideas, lol!

LOL Del! Bronwyn would fit right in with the Skathains as well, I know it, bahahaha!
From what I've heard, she probably would! I mean, not that I've actually read your books, which I still feel guilty about, but until you send me a word doc I can't....
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@delorfinde said:
That sounds great Elo! Want me to get my friend Sherlock to look at it too? *grin*

(And perhaps Holly, and Spock, and the Master.... Spook knows what I'm talking about, ha ha)


Sure, so long as they don't mind starting at book 3. I can of course, send you all three books. (Book 1 > 30K, Book 2 >80K, Book 3 >111 K) :}
Hehe, I'm gonna rewrite them shortly, so this event will not happen (something equally unpleasant will though, so never mind)
I shall send the first one for yours, Sherlock's and the rest's poking after I've rewritten it .. whenever that may be xP
Send me all three, I'm a little behind. Or perhaps just the second two since you said you're majorly rewriting the first?
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