Planning & Brainstorming

Okay here, is there any ideas...details we want to has out before we start?

My appoligies for not repliing sooner barracks internet went down cause some army guy #^*^ed it up. As to how they meet i think there should be big event that would errupt and cause chaos, pushing the two away from their normal lives and together. Perhaps a riot, a fight, maybe a demonstration gone wrong. And the end goal....maybe escape....find peace in a place together.... dunno. I think their main goal would be to get away from it all.

Yea, the marines (like me) all 60 or so of us live on the first floor of an army barracks cause we're only a small detachment here for schooling.

Sure I'll post today. :)

oh...um What were we gonna call it? Journey or is there something else you had in mind?

Good to go, I'm gonna order me some pizza and then I'll jump right into the story.

So I think that Aiko (the girl character) looks like this... http://www.cruzine.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/10/052-japan.jpg just an Idea.. I know she's more japanese but thats because her family moved to china when she was young. Hope thats okay.

Alrighty, I'm halfway done so it should be up in the next hour or two.

http://www.protagonize.com/exercise/journey-3/ done :) let me know if theres anything to change.