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Under the Lights (Closed between Kip, Shally16, dancingshoes14)

Posted by on July 15, 2012

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Shally16
Shally16
posted July 15, 2012
Oh, that sounds really cool!
Shally16
Shally16
posted July 15, 2012
Name: Dani
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Instruments: *Flute* piccolo, bass flute violin, viola, cello, bass, alto & tenor sax, piano, guitar, working on flugelhorn & trumpet
Personality: "tough" girl. Can stand in her own, doesn't really need others. Because of this, it is very difficult to make freinds with her. She usually becomes the leader and is used to being in charge. With her freinds is more relaxed, but otherwise slightly reserved and very sarcastic.
History: Dani's father was a rich businessman and her moths the classic stay at home mom. She was the oldest of 12 children, where she got used to being the one looked up to and in charge. She'd always loved music and practiced everyday. When her father found out about her talent with magic, he quickly sen her off to a special school. She hated it there, and thus decided to run off with the other two characters. She also spends her days learning as many instruments as possible.
Appearance: Chestnut brown wavy hair; emerald green eyes; freckles; slightly tanned skin; obviously grew up wealthy

And yeah, I get what you mean. It had to have some kind of depth.
Shally16
Shally16
posted July 16, 2012
Thanks!

And oh, I like that idea! And maybe, thief magic is only supposed to be used for good, so when they start doing crime, it starts acting up on them.
Shally16
Shally16
posted July 16, 2012
Yeah, ok, that makes more sense.

And yeah, me too.
Shally16
Shally16
posted July 16, 2012
Oh, yeah, that's awesome!
Shally16
Shally16
posted July 16, 2012
Yes!!!!!

Oh, sorry if I sounded too excited...
Shally16
Shally16
posted July 16, 2012
Lol.

Oh man, I just remembered something. I'm leaving tomorrow, and I won't be back until the 21st. I'm going to church camp. :-) but I won't have Internet for a week... -_- sorry, bad timing, I know...
Shally16
Shally16
posted July 16, 2012
Lol, yeah. Just put at the end of the line up, I don't want to hold you guys back! :-)
dancingshoes14
dancingshoes14
posted July 17, 2012
sorry, i've been quite busy recently, and i'm at school now, so I'll post my character tonight :) could somebody give me a quick runthrough of the plot? I don't quite get it :P Also, I'm away from this saturday to the two weeks ahead of that (UK time), I'll post the dates tonight :)
dancingshoes14
dancingshoes14
posted July 17, 2012
Okay, I'm away from 21st July - 5th August. And here's my character:

Name: Seth
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Instruments: *Piano*, cello, oboe, guitar, mandolin.
Personality: Very quiet, even around friends, clever; down-to-earth; generally happy; doesn't often show any other emotions.
History: Seth had lived on the Victorian streets from when he was 6 until he was 13, dodging orphanages as he was happy as he was. He had always known about his talent with magic. He got taken in by a working-class family when he was 13, who immediately sent him to a special school for others like him. Because he had never experienced school or anything like it, he ran away with two others.
Appearance: Silky, jet black hair just below his ears; big brown/maroon eyes, just underweight, slightly run down clothes.

hope it's okay, and sorry for being away! :P
dancingshoes14
dancingshoes14
posted July 17, 2012
Ahh, I get it, and I love it! :P I'm not sure about the name of the theatre/show and I'm not particularly bothered about the false names, but I imagined it to be set in London? I'm British, so it's the first thing that comes to mind, but I can imagine the three of them with broad London accents! :L
dancingshoes14
dancingshoes14
posted July 18, 2012
ooh, I love the title! As for the city... something--dale? Like Corkendale or something... :P
dancingshoes14
dancingshoes14
posted July 19, 2012
yeah, I like it!
dancingshoes14
dancingshoes14
posted July 20, 2012
I'll try to think - or search - for some tonight, but I can't promise anything cause I'm going away tomorrow :/
dancingshoes14
dancingshoes14
posted July 20, 2012
Luckily Shally's back tomorrow, so she might have some ideas!
Shally16
Shally16
posted July 20, 2012
Hey, I'm back! We left earlier than I thought we would, but it was fun. :-)

Anyways, I love all of the ideas! A band name, hmm... what about Shine On? Or Unchained Lights? Lights Resonance? I found a band name generator online. If you don't like any of these, go here: http://www.bandnamemaker.com/generator/?cw=Lights&submit.x=82&submit.y=32&submit=Generate+Band+Names

Um, I'm not sure about a theater name though. Maybe name it after the man who owns it?
Shally16
Shally16
posted July 20, 2012
Yeah, that sounds great! Anything else you need settled before you can finish writing? If not, looking forward to the chapter. :-)
Shally16
Shally16
posted July 21, 2012
Oh, definately go get some sleep!

And oh yeah, I forgot that dancingshoes is leaving. She'll be back two days before I move...
dancingshoes14
dancingshoes14
posted July 21, 2012
Right, just a quickie cos I'm going in an hour or two, and still need to pack some stuff! I love both the names and, again, I'm really sorry for the timing! :)
Shally16
Shally16
posted July 21, 2012
That's all right, have fun! :-)
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