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We will also have to explain why and how the mind interlock just suddenly happened. I'm thinking that the outside world thinks they are insane (but not all of them turn to others for help so that they don't get stuck in an asylum) the characters think it's a disease, but actually it's some form of alien interference.
I'd also suggest that the characters, after much confusion and frustation, eventually learn how to communicate through their thoughts. Also, when the story first begins (and they are not sure whats going on) whatever thoughts and feelings one character affects the thoughts and feelings of whoever his mind is interlocked with and vice versa.
I was thinking about creating more than one interlock. Then maybe each group of people whose minds are interlocked can somehow meet each other (probably by going to the same asylum or something) and help each other.
I think, with all the drama, that one character each will be enough, and it won't get to copmlex. I LOVE the disease idea, but instead of an alien interference, maybe an 'upper force' could have made it- not a God exactly, but a higher power. I dunno, just an idea. :P
I also really like the communication idea, but maybe they could learn to develop it further and learn how to shield their thoughts.
I like the idea of more than one interlock, but we'll need to make sure it doesn't get too complicated XD
I also thought, when they're really close to breaking it, the higher power could make it so they sometimes get it whilst their awake? But then it could backfire because it's helping them.
Actually, since it's a mind-meld, I was thinking that they would always get it (always recieving each others thoughts) while they were awake (were you wanting to change this?) and there dreams would also be mixed together. Are you saying that they would get something like daydreams or hallucinations or something so that they could work on breaking the interlock, because they can only try to break it (or make progress in trying to break it) in there dreams (but they can speculate as to how they need to break the interlock while they are awake)? Phew, this will be confusing, but awesome haha.
maybe they could always be able to hear each others thoughts when they're awake but be unable to answer them and it's only in dreams that they can have actual conversations and work out how to break it. Ooh, maybe when they get more advanced they can communicate whenever they like! But, the price for answering on another when they're awake is having hallucinations.
I'm starting to get really excited about this! xD
And I was trying to think of what they would have to do in order to try to break the interlock in their dreams. I was thinking that since it's basically a battle against their subconscious (which is being manipulated by the higher power) they would have to rely on each other to break it in each other's dreams (because each one's subconscious will be able to beat them. So, in essence, they cannot try and break their own side of the interlock- only other's).
Additionally, they have to break the interlock one mind at a time. And in order to free one person from the interlock the others have to pretty much solve or outsmart that person's subconscious (whether it be through riddles, equations, puzzles etc.)
If any of you two want to add or change something just say so. These are ideas that I'd like to implement, but I want to make sure that you guys like it all, so feel free to speak up about anything.
I had another thought - where and at what time is this set? I think the present time would be easiest because then we wouldn't have to work out details about the time era on top of everything! The country doesn't particularly matter either, we all speak english here! haha ^,^
Haha, thanks accioheadphones. No problem.
I'd like to work my bio into my introductory story if thats ok with the both of you. I don't care if you want to do your bio separate from the intro piece- both ways are fine with me.
I'll put my bio up later, I'm meant to be doing homework now XD
name:
age:
appearance:
personality:
other:
is there anything else to add to it?