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Name: Leaton
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Personality: (maybe)
Background Information: He was born in the Caribbean and is a child of an interracial couple. His father was born in the Caribbean. His mother was born in the Ohio.His father died in a train accident on first visit to the US however Leaton's mother and Leaton survive the train accident and continue living in Ohio.
Name: (still deciding)
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Personality: He is often battling severe depression because he does not like his job. He has environmental fighting skills and has paid the price for these soft skills.
Occasionally is drunk. Does not let this involve his work.
Is often overstressed while alone, but completely opposite when he is with strangers.
Background Information: He is a tourist that was born China. He is single and living alone in a small noisy neighborhood. He later meets with Leaton when he joins.
Name: Amelea
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Background Information: She is a young chinese girl that is the target and lover of Leaton. She is a roadside hotel caretaker. Her mother is a roadside restraunt owner.
I hope that makes it a bit clearer :)
@Trade: correct and add stuff if you want.
Valiant effort.
@Trade: what I suggest is if you want this to be one of your stories then after every chapter post a CLEAR statement of what you want to happen next. If you don't then we'll just go with whatever comes out.
Age:
Appearance:
Personality:
Background Information: She is a young chinese girl that is the target and lover of Leaton. She is a roadside hotel caretaker. Her mother is a roadside restraunt owner.
I hope that makes it a bit clearer :)
She is Leatons daughter she is not a target however she is killed and brought back
this sceen is done
DONT say both PLEASE!
@Trade: I'm basing it off the chapter you already wrote
It's not his love intrest it's hers