Planning & Brainstorming

I like it

And so, what happens is the boy is sent from the 'unknown force' to find the girl for a cause. In other words, he works for this being. So, he finds the girl and they meet. He puts on an act for the girl and tries to make her fall in love with him. At first it doesn't work at fistn but then she does. And all the cliche stuff (the guy falls in love with the girl). So, when they fall in love the girls father rejects him and they do the whole 'sneak away to see my lover' thing. Then, the boy has to go against the higher being. Yes?

you have my approval so far, if that counts for anything

I not sure why this story has a mature tag either it is not heavy

@Trade It doesn't? Well you can change it, but sometimes authors put on if there's any cussing or.. 'Mature' content. Idk if you set it like that or what, but yeah.
And I hope the plot is okay. And again. I don't want to get too far with it.
@Mycayla it does count :) I'm still not sure if this is a collab, but if it was, I'm pretty sure your in it!

Is this a collab? Because I think it should be :) itd be cool.

ok I understand this and can use this for The Fighter chapter but the Guy and the Girl are not known yet until nowThey are Korean
@lovemay said:

And so, what happens is the boy is sent from the 'unknown force' to find the girl for a cause. In other words, he works for this being. So, he finds the girl and they meet. He puts on an act for the girl and tries to make her fall in love with him. At first it doesn't work at fistn but then she does. And all the cliche stuff (the guy falls in love with the girl). So, when they fall in love the girls father rejects him and they do the whole 'sneak away to see my lover' thing. Then, the boy has to go against the higher being. Yes?

If this is in refrence to the guy and his girl freind and he is running exercising and she is there watching and waiting for him to finish

her father could also be angry and protective because her two younger brothers died recently

could still be years after

... I don't understand @Trade

@Trade So I went through it. Do you want to just start a new collab, or do you want us to basically copy and paste and edit the one that you have now and turn it into a collab? Or do you just wanna keep it and start a completely different collab?
@Mycayla it's okay. :P 'Just Go With It" :)

@lovemay Thanks for the advice :)

I'm trying to find only maybe two collaborator to help me write a complicated story as I mentioned earlier
I wrote a 50,000 word story and lost it i can only retain some of the info but the beginning chapter are near finished and are on my user info in is called Grid Tuner
I am trying to explain how this story goes
think slow a slow drawn out story I hate clichés like in holywood movies

my habit is to narrate I'm sorry for this

well then were gonna have to do character outlines and then you're gonna have to change your settings. Because you currently have it on a solo story.

This chat it seems as if i have to go some where else and then come back here to see what you write please write anything quickly so i can tell we are chatting

You have to refresh the page.

It's not like instant chat, or facebook.

if you want character names i will give you all i have and you can survey them
In other words ask me who they are and who they are in the story.That seems like a start what do you think?

just tell us your list of characters, names and roles.

okay, so is it okay if we basically elaborate it into a "protag" format? :)