Planning & Brainstorming

Ok, I'll work on it, but I might not have it up until Thursday. It's almost 11 pm here, and I'm going to an amusement park with my best friend tomorrow! :-)

I'm an hour behind you :-) that's ok. Have fun!

Awww! Can Cindy go next? She will be having a panic attack! She will probably try and heal him with air, but since she is still a little weak, it won't go well. She won't pass out this time though.

What about everyone else? What will the injuries be?

Hum... Fern could have cuts on his face, neck or shoulder area. I honestly wouldn't mind if he had a nice long cut across his face. Somehow, it seems fitting.

Good luck on your chapter, elf.

Owen could have a big gash across his upper cheek bone, right below his eye. Other than that though I think he would be mostly unhurt as his ability to control the glass would protect him at least a little.

Ok. So, Cindy goes all lcdazy and freaked out at seeing Denver like he is. Marina tries to console her. Someone tells her to be quiet or they will het caught. She shuts up cause she hears someone coming. She will turn everyone invisible and look at them, seeing their wounds and asking the air to heal them the best it can.

I cant get mthe chapter up tonight. As long as my mum doesnt make any surprise plans, it will be up tommorrow.

Does it sound ook? Do you want me to change any of it?

Sounds good to me. Oh, and elf, if Cindy needs calming down, Fern can help with his powers. He just needs to hold her hand or something (though it works better when it's forehead to forehead contact) to lower her stress and anxiety. Just an idea.

Ok. Maybe he just puts his hand on her shoulder, tells her to calm down and that someone might hear. That would do it. Ferns power (the little that would work from contact) and his words. She would stop freaking as much. Thanks.

Alright, sounds perfect, and don't mention it.

Hey guys everything sounds really good :) Sorry I was away for so long; I hadn't took into account how hectic going back to school for the first few days really could be. Especially after a nice long holiday ;)

I think Aya could have a small cut on the top of her hand, going from the tip of the pinky downwards diagonally to the left side of her hand. And a lot of minor grazes and bruises everywhere.

alright, I think it is my turn to write for Owen again :D I shall get to it ASAP :D I loved the chapter by the way! :D

Great chapter, @Skooch! Poor Denver and Cindy, I feel really bad for them...

Loved both chapters, @elf and @Skooch! Good job to both of y'all! :-)

I like all the chapters, they were really good at expressing the character's feelings :)

So, who's going next? And how's Denver going to get better, because if he dies ... noooo!!

Sorry if I seem as if I'm rushing things a bit. I'm trying to stop myself from asking too many questions ;P

You're not rushing things, Moo, I'm excited about what'll happen next in the story too and I really don't want Denver to die either.

So... who's going next?

I think who ever wants to go next can just jump in and go!

Will Alex do her little speech thing? Or will they get out, go to the hospital, get Fern better (hopefully, i really dont want him to die, Cindy would be devastated) and all get better? Maybe Alex visits them in the hospital and tells them whatbhappened?

Anyone??????? Firebird, you havent wrote for a while. Fancy putting the next one up?

I agree with elf. Are you able to put the next one up, Firebird? :)

If she does a speech, won't it make it easier for her dad to find her out? I had an idea: Alex helps them in her little apologetic way by notifying the hospital that the mermaids are coming and gives the hospital a note, instructing them to give it to the mermaids. The note has her apology instead of her broadcasting it on the loudspeakers.

How does that sound? :)

Okay, no problem, I'll write the next chapter. Oh, and thanks for the ideas, Moo and elf, they sound great.

I fell I should warn you though: I'm a BIG fan of the Olympic Games, and this year I promised that I would watch a bit of everything with my dad (and by everything I mean only individual sports and not collective sports like basketball, football, handball and whatnot - I really don't care for those).

Not saying that I don't have time, just less time than usual. Hopefully, though, I'll have something to post by tomorrow morning; I'll just have to stick to watching only the archery and gymnastics competitions today... and a little bit of swimming... but that's it, I swear!

Please be patient with me ~_~.