Planning & Brainstorming

I will go around some profiles an post up a link. See if any if you are able to post up on any fans or friends as well. I agree that we need outside feedback.

Hey, I was here trying to think of ways to edit my chapter and... do you think I should leave it as it is or should I continue?

If I continue, it will be a very long chapter (which would be tiring to readers), but if I don't continue, then @MooMoo will have to.

Would you be okay with that, @MooMoo? You can write the part where they meet the others... how about it?

Hi! I'm Shally's brother, Brad. Shally won't be able to get on for a while, so asked me if I could fill in for her. Is that all right with you guys? Either way, I will still keep her up dated.

Yeah sure. That is fine. You know all the basic details of what happens?

Yeah, Shally's talking non-stop about ideas for this story.

Welcome, Brad! ^_^.

Thanks! So, who's writing next?

Well... the way the story is now, it should either be me or @MooMoo.

You see, I was supposed to write till the part/point were mine and @MooMoo's character would meet the others. Problem is, I haven't written till that part yet and my chapter's already too long, so I can't continue (well, I can; but shouldn't, for the reader's sake).

I was hoping @MooMoo would continue where I left off (since his character, Aya, is finally awake and with my character). But @MooMoo hasn't answered me yet...

@firebird: will I post a comment on @MooMoo: profile?

Sorry everyone, I've been a tad bit busy. I'll write the chapter as soon as I can ... Promised :)

Okay. That's good. Who will go after you? I think Bannana because she will need to arive back in the cove what do you guys think?

yeah, I agree

Okay. And after her do you want to add a chapter (@Brad623)?

Yeah, sure.

do you guys mind if I write a chapter soon? it's been a while since I've written and I've only done it once. :D
-Skooch

Yeah. How about you rightone now? Bannana is kind busy so you right about MooMoo and firebird arriving and chatting and I will try to speed Bannana up.

Is that okay? And then brad can add himself in a chapter.

I'll just finish off my chapter to the point where we get to the rock and start explaining things :)

Okay that's good. And when you are done skooch can add one in.

Okay, I've finished. It ends at the moment that Firebird is about to start explaining things.
I ended it there because I thought Firebird (Fern) might like to write his history, instead of me writing it for him when Fern is telling Aya.

Okay. Skooch can retire where he is telling us his history and it ends with you guys coming down. Then firebird writes his history then someone writes us all together.