Planning & Brainstorming

Ugh, I really don't know. I just could t stand that class. I'm just glad it's finally over! Hawaii here I come! :-) too bad I have to wait until August, though...

I just finished reading the ENTIRE story, so I could remember all the details and everything. @Skooch, thanks for filling in for me. You did an amazing job with Denver! Now I can't wait to get started writing again. :-)

Oh wow!!!!!! I LOVE that chapter! All the description was perfect! I loved Denvers line at the end! "I feel like I got hit by a bus.... No, make that 4 buses. And a train" Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! That's funny!

Shally, you are going next, aren't you?

Um, I can, but I thought somebody was supposed to go before me. But if you want me too, I will.

Wow, thanks, @elf :D! I really tried my best in that chapter (you won't believe how many times I had to start over because I wasn't satisfied with how I wrote the begging) and I'm glad I did Denver justice (he is the funniest and most joyful character, after all), even if it was only a few sentences.

I wanted to know about Owen though. Was he okay? Not too out of character, I hope.

Can't wait for the next chapters!

I liked the train bit too! It made me giggle xD

I liked the way the way you wrote Aya's description: really nice. :)

Ok, the stage is yours, Shally!

I really appreciate how you've put the effort into re-immersing yourself and reading all those chapters! Thanks so much :)

Well, it's the lead I could do after leaving you his for so long. I'd feel like a horrible jerk if I just came back and expected you guys to tell me everything.

And I'll have a chapter up soon. :-)

Aw :)

Liked your chapter, by the way! Everyone's reactions to various people waking up was really fun to read :) Poor Marina. She'll get her guy soon anyway :D

Who's going next?

Ok guys! I'm finally back! I spent a looong time reading over all that has happened! I love the chapters! I will write a chapter for Owen ASAP.
@Firebird and @Shally16 they way you portrayed Owen was fine! Seeing as he has an affinity for earth...even though he doesn't know that is his power yet he still loves it...he would be even more irritable than he might be other wise so it's good! You portrayed him just fine! Though if he weren't cooped up he wouldn't have been nearly so irritable.
Also while I am back, I can't post quite as often as I usually do because I have cousins staying at my house this week. I will still get the chapter out and I will actually keep up with conversations now but I will probably just be a little slower is all. So yeah. :D Glad to be back! I love how the story is going!

Ok great and welcome back! :)

Ah, cousins ;) Yeh I'm fine with that. School starts next week for me so I'll be slower too.

And for your chapter Skooch, we planned that Owen writes his POV on the fight. Do you think it's too early for that?

Nope, I think the time is just about right. I am actually writing it right now :D

Oh ok. Cool :)

ok all done :D it's a little longer than what I usually write but hey...it was a big scene and it had to be finished :P

The chapter didn't seem overly long to me. Just the right length :)

So Marina is next. That would be elf's character, wouldn't it?

yeah I believe so. Can't wait to read her side! :D

Same! :)

I'm also excited about reading Marina's point of view in this fight. She's a character with a lot of potential.

The chapters are looking great. I really felt the raw emotion in the fight scene, the anger bubbling up inside of me (like Fern :) hehe).