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yeah... I was thinking that elseron and Atlas would be surrounded by Lycans in their wolf forms... and Dante comes in from the side in his bear form and thrashes the lycans while Elseron deals with those that Dante can't reach... just an Idea for a first encounter
I was thinking the same thing like the wolves run them down into an old building or dark alley or something then Dante charges in kills a dew while Elseron deals with the others while your fighting five or six of them. I was thinking aswell with Dante constantly wondering into lycan areas maybe its becouse he smills them or a hormone pheramone thing that he isn't aware about? Just an idea.
Thanks everyone!

Maybe we could all collaborate sometime again in the future.

Happy writing :)
@llmay maybe some other time... happy writting

@Lilley yeah that sounds great... I can write that into my chapter if someone leaves theirs as them surrounded...
@Lilley @TheBear73 @Colm

Yeah that sounds great guys! I like the idea of Elseron protecting her so she can run, but she doesn't get far and finds more trouble that Dante steps in and saves her from!

@Colm
Sounds great about your chapter, by the way! Can't wait to read it! :D

@Lilley
If you want, if we don't see you around for a little while, I can come and comment on your page to let you know we're active.

Oh, and triple posting would be making three chapter posts in a row without another author to break them up. I don't mind double-posting, but I think triple-posting would be a lot haha.
@rhetoric Ahhhh I see now. And it's ok I'll just come and look at what everyone's commented on when I can then just post my ideas or questions :) want to do another Elseron chapter tonight, so whens it set just to clear it all up? modern day or future??
@Lilley
Right, sorry! Forgot all about that question. It's in a parallel dimension, about the same time as ours but their world is more advanced. They have better tech, etc, but a lot of it is the "same" as our world but with a wider variety of "humanoids."
@rhetoric Right gota will get writing immiediatly :) and your happy with how i percieve Atlas? Just because of what you said and how much your intune with your characters just want to make sure :)
@Lilley
I absolutely think you've got a handle on her. I'm also the type to not get offended about it or anything - if I dislike anything or find something that doesn't quite line up, I won't hesitate to point it out and ask you to tweak it for me. :) I hope everyone else is the same way, haha.
Brilliant I'll get writing then :D and if there is anything dont hesitate to point it out and I'll happily tweak it to better fix your characters :)
@Lilley The same place Dante is going is not the same place Atlas and Elseron are.

But I did post a new chapter for Dante. This is a touch more indepth than before, I hope you like it. If there is something you don't like, just Let me know and I'll change it.
@TheBear73
Okay! Good to know it's not the same place. :) Getting my chap written up now.
also, as a side note:

in reference to the triple-posting, i think i was a little unclear. I don't care if the same person posts five chapters in a row, just mix up the characters. I don't want five chapters of Billy Bob, but if you post a chapter of Billy Bob, a chapter of George, a chapter for Sally, a chapter for Fred, and another chapter for Billy Bob, that's fine. :)
well... I suppose its a good thing we don't have a Billy Bob, George, Sally, and fred

There are enough of us on this project that we get about a chapter or 2 or 3 posted a day
@TheBear73
Haha, that is true, we have been making excellent progress with chapters! But in time that will taper off, as it always does in a collab, to posting maybe one a day or every other day. I like the pace this way because it keeps it alive. :)
This is very true. Once classes get started, I'm not sure just how much I'll be on here. Although all my classes are lecture so I might still be able to post more often then not
Im sorry about the delay with my next chap: schools gettin in the way. Ill have it up in the next day or 2
@Colm
that's all right :) it's giving us time to get everything set up!
Thats ok so :) im really lookin forward to writin the attack :)
Name: Fenrir
Species Sub Catagory: Lycan
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Bio: Fenrir comes from unbroken lineage of werewolves dating back to the first pack at the dawn of humanity, this lineage gives him strength and speed to overwhlem the rest of his kind like they were nothing more than rapid dogs. Lead his pack for the past fifty years but has had several thousand packs through the millenia.
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