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Atlanteans
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@llmay
I just put the title as "atlas of atlantis" for now. 'til we think of something better.
It's a short chapter by my standards but it gets it started!
http://www.protagonize.com/story/atlas-of-atlantis
@llmay
also, what species subcategory is Levi? I'm going to use that in the bios. Unless that is a secret?
She's a Valiant Aqua Hybrid

Meaning: Valiant is a category of special humans where they're very strong (emphasis on the strong) and very agile however they also carry great intelligence and can outsmart really anyone or thing if they're quick to thinking. But even though they're smart they don't always use it when they're fighting.

The Valiant are rarely seen in society because they usually join the army and travel around a lot.

Levi is also a hybrid of the Aqua. As you can guess the Aqua are people who can breath underwater (They don't know about Atlantis though). They have gills on their neck and sometimes have webbed hands and feet. The color of their skin can also vary (from blue to yellow, all types) but it's not too common now a days.

Levi being a hybrid, she doesn't have gills or webbed hands but she can breath underwater.

(I also wouldn't like this to be in the bio's because I want Levi herself to introduce what she is)
All this sounds awesome guys!
But what is this second story you keep mentioning?
Ill post my bio after school today!
@Colm
well, it was never really developed but @llmay wanted to hear it so i told her. "The second idea was kind of reverse. Meaning, it was the "outer world" that went looking for a specific Atlantean. I was thinking that Atlanteans would have incorporated themselves into the society already, yet managing to keep their home island hidden (travelling back and forth with like teleportation or something). I was thinking of making a character that was some kind of highly skilled assassin, and he was the one being looked for. I didn't know where to take that."

But don't worry about it; she's decided to go with the first story :)

And okay, sounds great!
@llmay
sorry about that! i totally missed your comment earlier; but that sounds awesome! i won't put it in the bio :)
Name: Gramtag
Age: undefined
Appearance: Black eyes; slim yet incredibly strong; very athletic. Black hair.
Personality: Lone wolf; viscous and unrelenting
Bio: Is a vampire assassin; has been for a very long time now. Gramtag has spent the past thousand years searching for his brother who disappeared while looking for the mythical city of Atlanits. He travels the world as an assassin for hire; feeding on humans everywhere he goes; constantly searching for any sign of his brother.

Sorry its such a short bio; I'll add more as i come up with it :)
@Colm Is he a Vampire....?
@Colm
I don't know why, but Protag has not been notifying me of posts. I was even online when you posted that. Anywho. Don't worry about it being short; it's all we need :) Can't wait for the chapter!

@llmay
It could be assumed so, judging by the "feeding on humans" remark.
hey guys, what's going on?
Eh.... Sorry I have still have some homework left and I just finished making brownies for my german and english class. I'll have to post the chapter tomorrow but probably in the morning. That ok?
@llmay
of course! i was just checking in :)
I'll try post this evening too :)
Hey! Am I slowed to join or is it just you guys?
@elf You are most definitely welcomed to join!
@elf
You are more than welcome to join! Just post up a bio and you're good to post whenever you've got a chapter ready!

We'll decide the chapter order for the rest of the story based on the order in which we post now, i think. Or maybe it just won't matter, haha.

bio:
name:
age:
species subcategory:
appearance:
personality:

You don't have to be really detailed if you don't want to; just give us a basic idea. And anything you want left out of the bio on the story page, just let me know.
Hello everyone I don't know. :D I was invited by @Ilmay and love the idea. Very original and very well thought out so far i love it :D I was thinking of doing a character that guards and protects Atlas as she goes travelling to other-world. Maybe a head of her household guard or something similar. Just because I dont think the Atlanteans will let their Queen really put herself in danger without protection. I like the idea of him being like an older brother to her having protected her since she was born. Just ideas thought looking for imput :D
@Lilley
I think that's a great idea! And welcome to the story! Thank you very much, by the way. I'm pretty excited about it :)

If you wanted to type up a quick bio, you could start a chapter any time :D
So what's going on with everyone? Seems we have a few new people considering joining; anybody decide yet?

@llmay
that was a great chapter, by the way!

@Colm
How is yours coming along?



:)
Ive started it! Hopefully up tonight or tmrw :)
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