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*SPOILER* Faerie Bound and Last of the Line: Author Discussion

Posted by Elorithryn on September 21, 2009

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posted September 28, 2009
Hm.. the bit about the bone is all Spook. I just think she wanted to torture Ash more. :P

@Spook Maybe you should have the Nurse changing the dressings on his chest wounds. That could be painful, but also a procedure they can do while he's awake.

@ Moon Wow, I didn't realize how big an island you were talking about. I'll have to go fix my chapters. Being a hospital I'll go with Morgan's stuff being in the room next to Ash's then. I imagine they'd be in private suites with showers (correct me if I"m wrong Moon, it is your island).

Let me know and I'll massage my chapters.

:} Elorithryn (is steping out for 30 mintues to go get lunch now)
Anna's
Anna's
posted September 28, 2009
Info's always here lol.
Yep links can be formed between anyone who knows and doesnt hate or is compleatly indefferent to you. Most Faeries cant uild a link with someone they've only spent a little time with unless they happen to be extreemly practised.
Morgan however can =D.

This means she has a link to Gloria aswell I'm guessing?
SpookOfNight
SpookOfNight
posted September 28, 2009
Ah, sorry about my innaccuracies, I'll go edit that now.... and read new chapter while I'm at it, XD
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
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posted September 28, 2009
Hm.. Interesting thought Anna. I don't think Mrogan is linked to Gloria right now. Though maybe she has and doesn't know it? I don't know.

Morgan's just now coming into her powers (good thing she met her Dad on the Bus). Ash is her first link, which she created out of necessity to keep him alive. She's still not sure exactly how she did it, or even if she could do it again.

Even with her Dad here to explain things to her. A lot of what she can do will only be discovered through necessity. Morgan thinks she knows her limits, but she is continually under estimating herself.

:} Elorithryn
SpookOfNight
SpookOfNight
posted September 28, 2009
Okay, chapter editing commences now... sorry, got caught up in other stuff, WIL DO IT NOW!!
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
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posted September 28, 2009
My editing is now complete. Just had to rearange getting lost and taking a shower. Wonder if Ash saw her streak by?

:} Elorithryn
SpookOfNight
SpookOfNight
posted September 28, 2009
Ha ha, he'd have loved it if he had, XD

Naw, don't worry, Ash'll go along with any topic of conversation... I'll lend tips if you get stuck ;D

Just remember he's trying to make fun of the situation to keep his mind off The Question.... and he probably won't want to discuss that for a while yet.
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
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posted September 28, 2009
Hm.. okay. I don't know if I'll get a chance to write anything tomorrow, so if you could give me hints of what he might say to try and start a conversaiotn that would really help - though I had a thought ):-} (that's my devilish face) What is that bag falls back on his chest - Morgan feel the need to go over and make sure it gets put back properly, then she might try to heal his chest some more, or at least take some of the pain away - since she'll be right there in close proximity with the link 'transmitting' more to her.

AND: Plot Thought
What if the Van Helsings are experimenting with breeding to try and breed the best hunter out there - Ash, being one of their experiments, which they concider a failure. - The baby (from Serean's death scene) is another experiment. I'm thinking that maybe there is Elven or Faerie Blood in one or both of them, unless you guys can think of another non-human race to throw in there.

:} Elorithryn
Anna's
Anna's
posted September 28, 2009
Haha looks like I should catch up with the stories lol.

No. must focus. Compare the use of iambic pentameters in shakspearian sonnet form to Jhon donne's the Flea and THEN catch up grrr. Stupid school.

Hehe well A its up to you to decide about the link between Gloria and Morgan. They can be formed through a strong freindship unintentionally but I think your right. She didn't really even know she could make them on the bus.
Gosh she still has alot to learn from mike then.

Theres the whole nature side of it that all faeries have and of course they have to find Morgans own tallents
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
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posted September 28, 2009
I can't remember does Ash know Morgan's half faerie and that Mike's her Dad at this point? Ack... must got back to the Bus (unless Spook knows off the top of her head)

:} Elorithryn
SpookOfNight
SpookOfNight
posted September 28, 2009
He knows Mike's her dad... but not about the faerie part, that'll shock him, XD

Then again, this has been full of so much wierdness I doubt ANYONE can be shocked any more.... XD

And... ME LIKE PLOT THOUGHT VERY VERY MUCH!!!! Good plan, I could very happily run with that... (great, all the more reasons why my life sucks *groan* - Ash)

Back tomorrow guys, Karate lesson now, Bye!
Anna's
Anna's
posted September 28, 2009
Oh if there was faerie blood in the van helsings Mike would know. Or at least his father would.

He knows that Mikes morgans father i think but not the faerie thing xx
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
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posted September 28, 2009
I was thinking that it's not so much there's Faerie Blood in the Van Helsings, but that they've gone and intentionally (though what ever means necessary) inpregnated a Faerie, or half Faerie, to see what kind of hunter they could create. Same idea with Elves or a half elf... or what ever other non-human we can think of, though I'd rather limit the magical creature to a minimum or we're going to get really confused over who does what.

:} Elorithryn
Anna's
Anna's
posted September 28, 2009
Ahhh spook is in ninja training.
*Hides behind a wall*

Will need more than faerie magic to protect me from that x
Anna's
Anna's
posted September 28, 2009
Ohhh Maybe with the faeries. Mikes brother would probably give up his wife as an honour to create a hunter child. Stupidly proud for the family line.

xx
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
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posted September 28, 2009
Now that would be a little wierd if Ash was actually the son of Morgan's Uncle's Wife - they'd be like, what Step-cousins? Not necessarily blood related, but weird and awkward none the less.

:} Elorithryn
Anna's
Anna's
posted September 28, 2009
Haha would be kinda lmao

Besides hes Mikes half brother just to add an extra twist =P
xxx
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
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posted September 28, 2009
Hm.. but what will Moon and Spook think?

I can picture Spook cackling in delight at this devilishness while Ash just moans and groans at his horrible misfortune of a life. At least Ash has got Morgan.

:} Elorithryn
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
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posted September 28, 2009
Oh, by the way, I'll be a bit unavaliable this weekend. Starting tuesday afternoon (evening time for you English gals) and I won't likely be back until Late Sunday (If I don't just pass out).

I'm trying to write my next post now, but have been against a block. I think I may have had a breakthrough while folding the laundry. We'll see how it goes after the kids are in bed.

:} Elorithryn
ElorithrynGroup Moderator
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posted September 29, 2009
SoooooK I'm stuck. QQ I'm having a hoorible time breaking the silence btween Ash and Morgan. About the only thing I've managed to write that I like is another shared dream, but I don't want to use it yet. GAH!

Okay I do have some thoughts like:
Ash might say, "Are you going to dance for me?" (because Morgan's wearing the skirt she was wearing in the dream) Which causes a little exchange and he manages to make Morgan giggle, which make him smile and laugh but that hurts his chest, then Morgan reaches over and takes his hand to soothe the pain...
My current Ash reaction is "What'd you do, magic?" to which Morgan eventually replies "Yeah, Faerie Magic." Then he calls her "Morgan le Fey" which makes her cringe (childhood teasing memories, if you don't remember from the bus) - not sure of Ash's reaction here - then I'm half tempted to have that IV bag fall on him again - Morgan will put it back up (by leaning over Ash) and ends up losing her balance. In an effort not to fall on his chest, she ends up with her hands on either side of his head, her face close to his. - then a nurse comes in and interrupts the moment and Morgan goes to her room to sleep - perhaps Ash asks her to dream of him, or something.

Any thoughts or comments would be well appreciated. Now i"m off to lunch.

:} Elorithryn
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