New Members

I've noticed that the majority of threads that come up here are "can you read my story" threads. I know new members are just hoping to get noticed, but I think this discussion board can be freed up for other discussions. So, if you want someone to read your story, leave a post on this thread, and anyone who's looking to help us newbies out can check out the latest posts here!

Make sure to post a SHORT description of your story/poem, and leave a link.

I'll start us off:

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Is it an Idol?

"There's a thin line between chasing your dreams and being selfish. Have I just crossed the line?"

This story focuses on three extremely different aspiring celebrities who face their own unique struggles as they experience the dark underbelly of the Japanese entertainment industry.

Jae, a young Korean born to a musically inclined family, has been stifled by her parents' overbearing musical preferences, and finally decides to try her hand at breaking into the K-pop industry, only to be brutally rejected. Has she reached a dead end?

Hiro, an underworked actor struggles to find work where he can, and despite his optimistic outlook he can feel the beginnings of regret stirring in his heart. Will he turn his back on the career he once pursued with passion?

Azami, the veteran of the idol industry at the tender age of twelve, feels like the smile that's been plastered on her face day in and day out is wearing out. Is her mask about to crack?

Follow these three as their paths intertwine, pulled by the strings of fate.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/is-it-an-idol

Stickied. Good idea. I think we have one of these in one of the other groups already, but not in here.

This is a good idea, I love self promotion ;)

Deadrick Blade

"Deadrick Blade is an Inquisitor, his only purpose in life is to hunt down the creatures of the night.
When he discovers a plot between the three major Unholy factions, he is forced to leave his solitary life, and with the help of a few stragglers he picks up, he must stop the plans of the Unholy, all the while being pursued by an evil spirit."

http://www.protagonize.com/story/deadrick-blade

Thanks!

CharlieRoberts

http://www.protagonize.com/story/to-love-and-to-be-loved-back

"Stacey is reunited with a past lover, and although things have changed in the past eighteen months, she and James may just rekindle what they never had....."

http://www.protagonize.com/story/until-we-meet-again

Complete Innocence
The story of a young girl in an all girls boardign school whose life is changed dramatically when she has to leave.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/complete-innocence

dotty
xxx

'Sup.

Prayer For A Loser, Mantra For The Weak is a poem I wrote to express some feelings I had. Y'can read it or ignore it, or even like it if you want.

http://www.protagonize.com/poem/prayer-for-a-loser-mantra-for-the-weak-1

There is swearing, though, I should warn you.

Nice idea.

I'm writing a story, but it's really more for fun. The idea is that whenever I decide add a new chapter, I make up the plot on the spot, not really caring about whether it makes sense or not.

It's got about 2 chapters as of now.

The Non-Sensical Tale Of The Jackster

Death Wish: A Young Reporter (his name is David) manages to land an interview with a mysterious young woman who the media has dubbed Death Wish. Though she has no powers and seems just like any other person she's basically become the city's hope. She's sarcastic, spastic, and the relationship between her and David is yet to be revealed but there's definitely more to it than meets the eye, whether David realizes it or not.

This story is told both through the fast paced, typically very sarcastic and frustrating, interview between the highly nervous David and the secretive Death Wish (he can't even get her to give him any kind of real name, for example) and through the stories Death Wish decides to tell about her childhood and how she became who she is.

It's good, I promise. Funny. It's going to get dramatic. I try to post a chapter every day. I really need more comments and support to keep it going!

Can you guys tell me what you think of it? Thanks.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/forever-alive-forever-doomed

Silver Rivers

Link:http://www.protagonize.com/story/silver-rivers

This story focuses on Ka a young street rat with 'special benefits' living in the London backstreets whose basic rule is survive, the cowards why of course. It follows Ka has he becomes entangled in the chaotic madness that engulfs England with the escape of 'Silver' a poison which has developed a consciousness courtesy of England's greatest minds with the intention of being a military weapon. Join Ka as he and his gang as they traverse London in the struggle to capture 'Silver' and make it out to see another day. Take into consideration two of London's finest detectives on their tracks, a government official with revenge in mind and a mysterious cat that seems to come out of nowhere and you've got a tale filled with thrills and laughs all the way.

A short story, split into three chapters, of how a lady is now no longer lonely.

@zippolita: it would be easier to find your story if you post a link to it, like this: http://www.protagonize.com/story/lonely-lady

The more convenient it is for people to find your story, the more likely they are to read it!

http://www.protagonize.com/story/traditional-barrel-racing-duh

I've been writing this really, really long story for the last year or so and I'm wanting some feedback on it.

It's all about a girl with amnesia, which I tried to handle as best I could. It's got a fantasy setting, with some romance and crazy teenagers.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/twins-of-memory

First Story - It's only the first chapter but see what you think?

It comes from 'Memoirs' that led to events surrounding fantasy in a sort of dark 'Chronicles of Narnia'

http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-mind-is-poison

Cheers!

This is excellent... first poem here...

http://www.protagonize.com/poem/they-said-write-right

Thanks Cristelle

Hey , I've been on here for a little while, but I just got a chance to post in this topic. Please read some of my posts. =)

OK hey guys! 'New' story needing more comments/critique/ratings

The Necklace -
The necklace is an ancient talisman that only comes to those with great power. It opens their world to one of magic, good and evil and the battle for supremecy. The one who has the necklace is key in the battle between good and evil. But as well as great power, the necklace has one condition. It will only leave the wearer when they are dead. Only then will it seek out a new warrior.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-necklace-3

Thanks!
dotty
xxx

Hi all - any chance of a critique?

http://www.protagonize.com/story/an-acolyte

Especially regarding grammar (british style), and suggestions for a better title would be appreciated :)
(see guidance)

It's been filtered by Litopia standards (ugh) and is the new and shiny MkII, which I've posted seperately for the moment - just until people decide which is better.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/an-acolyte-mkii