@Luna, I'll add some stuff! :) oh, and did you mean "peasant" instead of "pheasant"? A pheasant is a bird... I'll get some other details done later. I like your status, I'll change a few things when I post the story. Do you have any better ideas for names though?? (for mine!!! :)
Revised Profile: Name: Lucy "LuLu" Layborne (once again, any other better royal names?) Age: 14 Gender: female Hair: wavy, shoulder length, light brown Eyes: deep hazel-green Skin: golden tan Build: shorter, thin, fit Status: Royalty Undercover Identity: Acrobat Personality: Very bubbly and happy. Love's to smile semi-"rebellious" Family:
History:
Skills:
Abilities:she is very flexible, and a daredevil. She will do almost anything. The only extreme she will not go to is something that will kill her, or others.
@Frankie, thanks! :) we'll have you read it when we get there! :)
Here's the idea: The main antagonist is the Kings Court Jester, and he is trying to do something to Lucy (we'll decide what later...probably kill, or marry...), and that's why she ran away. Victoria is just in hiding so she isn't arrested as a thief. They are very good friends, but it isn't until into the story that they know each others identities.
After the prologue, we'll open on an opening night of the circus in Lucy's hometown...very near the palace. It's the first one since she ran away and joined the circus almost a year ago. The Court Jester and the King are present, as ell as Lucy's sister. After the performance Lucy will come clean with Victoria, as well as swear her to secrecy. The circus is there for another week, so they will run away, in fear that Lucy will be found.
How's that for the beginning of the plot. In the prologue I'll just say that she's running for her life, think about a title! :) Oh, And it will be in first person.
oh, whoops! yeah thats what i meant...not a bird. haha
Yep, thats all good so we have charatcers now.
THANKS SO MUCH FRANKIE!!! be prepared to edit this story! haha
Ah huh, sounds good.
You better get the name right, its Violet, not Victoria!
Yeah, i already read the prologue, its great.
I'll post the first chapter over the next week or so, finishing school then going camping so i'll try to post before i leave for Gracetown, if not - don't panic if i don't come online for a while, camping where there be no internet connection...*sigh*
hey, do you want to post the first chapter? i'm having a bit of writers block and I need to finish my Modern History and Foods assessments by thursday and i haven't started them (oops!)
plus you seem to actually know where to start, i'll pick it up after you. okays?
I'll get some other details done later. I like your status, I'll change a few things when I post the story. Do you have any better ideas for names though?? (for mine!!! :)
Revised Profile:
Name: Lucy "LuLu" Layborne (once again, any other better royal names?)
Age: 14
Gender: female
Hair: wavy, shoulder length, light brown
Eyes: deep hazel-green
Skin: golden tan
Build: shorter, thin, fit
Status: Royalty
Undercover Identity: Acrobat
Personality: Very bubbly and happy. Love's to smile semi-"rebellious"
Family:
History:
Skills:
Abilities:she is very flexible, and a daredevil. She will do almost anything. The only extreme she will not go to is something that will kill her, or others.
@Frankie, thanks! :) we'll have you read it when we get there! :)
Here's the idea:
The main antagonist is the Kings Court Jester, and he is trying to do something to Lucy (we'll decide what later...probably kill, or marry...), and that's why she ran away. Victoria is just in hiding so she isn't arrested as a thief. They are very good friends, but it isn't until into the story that they know each others identities.
After the prologue, we'll open on an opening night of the circus in Lucy's hometown...very near the palace. It's the first one since she ran away and joined the circus almost a year ago. The Court Jester and the King are present, as ell as Lucy's sister. After the performance Lucy will come clean with Victoria, as well as swear her to secrecy. The circus is there for another week, so they will run away, in fear that Lucy will be found.
How's that for the beginning of the plot. In the prologue I'll just say that she's running for her life, think about a title! :) Oh, And it will be in first person.
There it is! :) do we want to make a new topic, or keep this one?
Yep, thats all good so we have charatcers now.
THANKS SO MUCH FRANKIE!!! be prepared to edit this story! haha
Ah huh, sounds good.
You better get the name right, its Violet, not Victoria!
Yeah, i already read the prologue, its great.
I'll post the first chapter over the next week or so, finishing school then going camping so i'll try to post before i leave for Gracetown, if not - don't panic if i don't come online for a while, camping where there be no internet connection...*sigh*
plus you seem to actually know where to start, i'll pick it up after you. okays?