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For this month's contest, I want you to experiment with sensory detail. Writers like Gabriel Garcia Marquez used sensory detail to make the page come alive to the reader, even when the events occurring on that page were fantastical.
Here are the contest rules:
Compose a flash fiction piece of 300 - 1,000 words in length. The piece must adhere to the characteristics of flash fiction -- you must have a protagonist, a conflict, and a resolution. Here are some more guidelines:
- Choose at least one of the five senses and use this as the focus of your piece. Yes, you can combine all five senses in your piece, although I challenge you to experiment with a more limited sensory palette.
- Your story may be written from any point of view -- 1st, 2nd, or 3rd, or even a combination.
- The genre is also flexible -- write in whatever style you feel comfortable, but remember to keep it PG.
- The setting/time is also flexible -- feel free to play with time and location.
You have until February 27, 11:59 PM (EST) to enter. Write your entry as you would any other story on Protagonize, and then come back here and provide the link in a comment so that we can read it.
I will be announcing the winner on February 28th. The winning piece will feature the best use of sensory detail.
Should you have any questions, post them in the comments below. Good luck! :D
If my childhood were to have a scent, it would be that of gardenias.
I still remember my first house -- I remember it was raised on stilts and that the neighborhood cats often made their home beneath it, the frequent mewling of newborn kittens the soundtrack of my early childhood. I remember it was infested with small white mice, like small escapees from a lab, and how one night my mother woke up screaming when one such enterprising mouse decided to join her in bed. I remember, too, the never-ending backyard, how it stretched into our neighbors' yards. An endless expanse of green. But what I remember most about my childhood is the scent of gardenias, those diffident white blooms that only bloomed by cover of night. Their pillow-heavy, sonorous fragrance lulling me to sleep.
After my brother's birth, we moved into a bigger house. What I missed from my first house was not the mewling cats or the lab rats. Not even the huge yard. What I missed was the scent of gardenias from the bush that grew beneath my window. To this day, whenever I smell gardenias I remember what it was like to be secure, to be loved. To be a child.
Oh yeah, I'm in.
Moon
http://www.protagonize.com/story/summer-meadow
Moon
I haven't been able to work on it much but I haven't had time to. I wrote it and did a quick edit. Hope you enjoy it. Think I might use this scene in something in the future. :)
Hope I am still on time!! Here is my entry
http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-rain-in-his-skin
Enjoy (=
Edit: Okay, I read through the entries again and have made my decision. It was rough, as anticipated, as all of the pieces were very well written, but my final section is "Make Sure you Cover Up" by Rah. I thought she displayed the most effective use of sensory detail in her piece. You'll definitely want to check her piece out if you haven't already -- it's an excellent example not just of sensory detail, but of flash fiction at its best. You can read that here: http://www.protagonize.com/story/make-sure-you-cover-up
The other entries deserve mention, as they were excellent pieces in their own right. "The Rain in his Skin" by LuneXian was both haunting and tender. It stayed with me long after I finished reading it. Be sure to check that out: http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-rain-in-his-skin. Moon's entry, "Summer Meadow," is both sensual and sensory, a great read overall. Plus it has a neat plot twist at the end. You can find that here: http://www.protagonize.com/story/summer-meadow.
Thanks to everyone who entered this contest. Stay tuned in the next week for this month's writing challenge. :)