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Contest: In a Sense [February]
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Apologies for my neglecting this group -- sickness and work responsibilities got in the way of one of my favorite pastimes -- writing! Sad times... Happily, I now have more time to devote to this group, so you can expect more writing contests, articles, and other goodies in the days and weeks to come. :)

For this month's contest, I want you to experiment with sensory detail. Writers like Gabriel Garcia Marquez used sensory detail to make the page come alive to the reader, even when the events occurring on that page were fantastical.

Here are the contest rules:

Compose a flash fiction piece of 300 - 1,000 words in length. The piece must adhere to the characteristics of flash fiction -- you must have a protagonist, a conflict, and a resolution. Here are some more guidelines:

- Choose at least one of the five senses and use this as the focus of your piece. Yes, you can combine all five senses in your piece, although I challenge you to experiment with a more limited sensory palette.
- Your story may be written from any point of view -- 1st, 2nd, or 3rd, or even a combination.
- The genre is also flexible -- write in whatever style you feel comfortable, but remember to keep it PG.
- The setting/time is also flexible -- feel free to play with time and location.

You have until February 27, 11:59 PM (EST) to enter. Write your entry as you would any other story on Protagonize, and then come back here and provide the link in a comment so that we can read it.

I will be announcing the winner on February 28th. The winning piece will feature the best use of sensory detail.

Should you have any questions, post them in the comments below. Good luck! :D
Group Manager
P.S.) I will be posting an example in a couple of days, to give you a better idea of what I'm looking for. I'm still fine-tuning my piece, but you can expect it soon. :)
I'm in :)
Group Manager
@LuneXian No, the title doesn't need to include anything in particular, unless you want it to. Just don't forget to come back here and provide the link for us to read.
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Here is my example. It's not a typical ff piece in that it doesn't exactly follow the traditional narrative style, but I did try to include some sensory details.

If my childhood were to have a scent, it would be that of gardenias.

I still remember my first house -- I remember it was raised on stilts and that the neighborhood cats often made their home beneath it, the frequent mewling of newborn kittens the soundtrack of my early childhood. I remember it was infested with small white mice, like small escapees from a lab, and how one night my mother woke up screaming when one such enterprising mouse decided to join her in bed. I remember, too, the never-ending backyard, how it stretched into our neighbors' yards. An endless expanse of green. But what I remember most about my childhood is the scent of gardenias, those diffident white blooms that only bloomed by cover of night. Their pillow-heavy, sonorous fragrance lulling me to sleep.

After my brother's birth, we moved into a bigger house. What I missed from my first house was not the mewling cats or the lab rats. Not even the huge yard. What I missed was the scent of gardenias from the bush that grew beneath my window. To this day, whenever I smell gardenias I remember what it was like to be secure, to be loved. To be a child.
Did you write that piece, Ana? It was fabulous! I could see / smell / hear / feel that whole scene. I just hope my piece even comes close.

Oh yeah, I'm in.
Moon
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@moonwalker Yes, that piece is mine. Thanks, moon! :)
I first really smelled gardenias in Macon, Georgia. I remember a cobblestone street stretching to the side, the sidewalk bordered with gardenias. Humidity was off the charts. It had just rained the night before, and it stank like sewage all morning. But when the sun started getting high in the sky, the gardenias just sliced through the other smells. The heat on my skin, the yellow wash of sun, and that holy, galvanizing smell... I could never reclaim that moment.
Group Manager
@LuneXian Flash Fiction technically should follow the standards of fiction, including conflict, etc., but I'm more concerned with including sensory details in your piece, to be honest. So I won't mind if it's a little loose as far as structure so long as it's well written. :)
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@zxvasdf Was that just a response, or your official entry? Either way, it was so evocative, I was on that cobblestone street, feeling the heat on my skin and breathing in "that holy, galvanizing smell." Nicely done.
Here's my entry, Ana.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/summer-meadow

Moon
I am glad I came across this today. Yesterday I experimented with a micro fiction piece so flash fiction will be a fun evolution of my practice. This sounds like a good place to start :)
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Friendly reminder, the due date for this contest is tomorrow, Sunday. I look forward to reading your entries!
http://www.protagonize.com/story/make-sure-you-cover-up

I haven't been able to work on it much but I haven't had time to. I wrote it and did a quick edit. Hope you enjoy it. Think I might use this scene in something in the future. :)
Hi
Hope I am still on time!! Here is my entry

http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-rain-in-his-skin

Enjoy (=
Group Manager
I'm reading through the entries now, and can I just say I have my work cut out for me, judging wise. They are all so good! This won't be easy... But I should have my decision up soon.

Edit: Okay, I read through the entries again and have made my decision. It was rough, as anticipated, as all of the pieces were very well written, but my final section is "Make Sure you Cover Up" by Rah. I thought she displayed the most effective use of sensory detail in her piece. You'll definitely want to check her piece out if you haven't already -- it's an excellent example not just of sensory detail, but of flash fiction at its best. You can read that here: http://www.protagonize.com/story/make-sure-you-cover-up

The other entries deserve mention, as they were excellent pieces in their own right. "The Rain in his Skin" by LuneXian was both haunting and tender. It stayed with me long after I finished reading it. Be sure to check that out: http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-rain-in-his-skin. Moon's entry, "Summer Meadow," is both sensual and sensory, a great read overall. Plus it has a neat plot twist at the end. You can find that here: http://www.protagonize.com/story/summer-meadow.

Thanks to everyone who entered this contest. Stay tuned in the next week for this month's writing challenge. :)

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