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Sanctuary

Needing harsh help....

Posted by Sanctuary on July 11, 2012

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posted July 11, 2012
Hey, everyone! Bli-Bli (formerly) Pokemoll here, and with a new story to boot. I'm quite proud of this, though it may be a little cliché and cheesy for some tastes. But, if people jumping off houses to another roof is your kinda thing, then I beg of you to take a little look. I'm only on the first chapter right now, but if any interest is shown I vow to finish it... x3

So, please, take a look? Much appriciated!

http://www.protagonize.com/author/Bli-Bli
TurnOutTheLight
TurnOutTheLight
posted July 11, 2012
Nice Moggster
Betwixt
Betwixt
posted July 16, 2012
Which story are you wanting reviewed? The link it only to your profile and you've written a lot.

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