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VictoriaGlass

Serious Critique Desperately Needed

Posted by VictoriaGlass on June 15, 2012

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VictoriaGlass
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posted June 15, 2012
http://www.protagonize.com/story/a-taste-of-shadow/

Trying to actually finish one of my stories this time (Yeah like thats actually going to happen) and Id like some real constructive criticism/critique on it. Id love to go into detail about the plotline here but it would kind of spoil it for anyone who might be reading it (actually no ones reading it but thats besides the point) so you'll just have to go read it and find out.
Sometimes I hit dry spells in my writing and it turns out dull and flat without any dimension to the words. I'm afraid thats begun to happen with this story.
Please tell me what you think of it and comment if there are any mistakes. Thanks so much!

~VG~

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