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I might be new to this community but I'm ready for some honest critique.
Please check out my 1st post. It is the 1st chapter in what I'm hoping will become a book. It is written from the perspective of several characters during our modern day. I'm not sure where this story is going exactly but I do have the beginning and end in mind.
I would love feedback, criticism, first impressions - anything that lets me know what you thought and felt when reading this chapter. Reply to this thread and I will be more than happy to do the same.
Thanks so much!