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Vices--a mystery with a vulgar edge

Vices--a mystery with a vulgar edge
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The story I'm writing relies heavily on profanity and other forms of "low-brow" prose. While any feedback would be wonderful, I'm most interested in hearing if people think the vulgarity is too much.

I have about 30k words written in this story, so I can upload more if people like it.

Here's the link:
http://www.protagonize.com/story/vices

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