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Today

accioheadphones

accioheadphones created the topic Giving Critiques! in the Critiques Wanted group

1 hr ago

bartkc

bartkc created the topic Critique in the Critiques Wanted group

2 hrs ago

bartkc

bartkc created the topic Critique wanted please in the Critiques Wanted group

2 hrs ago

Ransom

Ransom posted a new reply in the topic Need Detailed Critique for Short Paragraph in the Critiques Wanted group.

"Thanks to those who gave me critiques! I've posted a revised version of the paragraph: http://www.protagonize.com/story/no-place-like-home-revised -Please critique and feel free to be persnickety! I..."

2 hrs ago

bartkc

bartkc posted the chapter Eleventh Frame, Part Two - "Staying Late" in the story The Eleventh Frame

2 hrs ago

bartkc

bartkc posted the chapter A Calendar for Christmas, Part 3 - "Ghosts of Past, Present, and Future" in the story A Calendar for Christmas

2 hrs ago

bartkc

bartkc posted the chapter Calendar for Christmas, Chapter Two - "The Lost Gift" in the story A Calendar for Christmas

2 hrs ago

Yesterday

JeanneAntoinetteDoyle

JeanneAntoinetteDoyle posted the chapter Chapter 6: By Thy Oath in the story KoC ~ Knights of Concordia

9 hrs ago

JeanneAntoinetteDoyle

JeanneAntoinetteDoyle posted the chapter Chapter 5: Protecting What's Important III in the story KoC ~ Knights of Concordia

10 hrs ago

JeanneAntoinetteDoyle

JeanneAntoinetteDoyle posted the chapter Chapter 4: Protecting What's Important II in the story KoC ~ Knights of Concordia

11 hrs ago

JeanneAntoinetteDoyle

JeanneAntoinetteDoyle posted a new reply in the topic Critiques wanted for "KoC ~ Knights Of Concordia" in the Critiques Wanted group.

"EDITTED: I've editting my story based on a few reviews, I looking for critiques on the new revised version, before I really get into the story (action part)."

Yesterday at 1:41pm

JeanneAntoinetteDoyle

JeanneAntoinetteDoyle posted the chapter Chapter 1: Final Breath in the story DBSC ~ Dragon Ball: Saiyan Chronicles

Yesterday at 10:32am

JeanneAntoinetteDoyle

JeanneAntoinetteDoyle submitted the story DBSC ~ Dragon Ball: Saiyan Chronicles to the Critiques Wanted group.

Yesterday at 9:46am

angel-of-darkness

angel-of-darkness posted the chapter Conclusion in the exercise DreAmS

Yesterday at 8:25am

angel-of-darkness

angel-of-darkness posted the chapter Counselling in the exercise DreAmS

Yesterday at 8:22am

accioheadphones

accioheadphones created the topic Critique on my Completed Novel: Fractured Souls in the Critiques Wanted group

Yesterday at 4:42am

elf

elf posted a new reply in the topic Real critique on my novel: The Element Adventures and the Sanctuary of Light? in the Critiques Wanted group.

"It is an enjoyable read. I have posted a mistake I noticed. Will continue to read soon."

Yesterday at 4:32am

accioheadphones

accioheadphones joined the Critiques Wanted group.

Yesterday at 4:26am

elf

elf created the topic Norse god fanfic (link inside) in the Critiques Wanted group

Yesterday at 2:44am

Aoife.J.Sherwood

Aoife.J.Sherwood created the topic Real critique on my novel: The Element Adventures and the Sanctuary of Light? in the Critiques Wanted group

Yesterday at 1:00am

Aoife.J.Sherwood

Aoife.J.Sherwood removed the story The Element Adventures and...The Sanctuary of Light: Volume One from the Critiques Wanted group.

Yesterday at 12:59am

Aoife.J.Sherwood

Aoife.J.Sherwood submitted the story The Element Adventures and...The Sanctuary of Light: Volume One to the Critiques Wanted group.

Yesterday at 12:59am

2 days ago

bartkc

bartkc created the topic Critique wanted in the Critiques Wanted group

Yesterday at 9:37pm

H.C.Mounsell

H.C.Mounsell posted a new reply in the topic I am Publishing my First Novel and Serious Critiques Would Be Greatly Appreciated in the Critiques Wanted group.

Friday at 2:27pm

3 days ago

HourglassThorne

HourglassThorne submitted the poem Look Within to the Critiques Wanted group.

Thursday at 8:47pm

MRaemisch

MRaemisch posted a new reply in the topic I am Publishing my First Novel and Serious Critiques Would Be Greatly Appreciated in the Critiques Wanted group.

"Hey would you like me to proofread it?"

Thursday at 8:25pm

MRaemisch

MRaemisch joined the Critiques Wanted group.

Thursday at 8:24pm

Jackerbie

Jackerbie posted a new reply in the topic How old would you guess this character is? in the Critiques Wanted group.

"based on his diction, i'd place him between 14 and 16. for a diary entry, he's got a good command of language: more or less proper spelling, grammar, and punctuation. so i'd say he's either in school..."

Thursday at 6:26pm

H.C.Mounsell

H.C.Mounsell posted a new reply in the topic How old would you guess this character is? in the Critiques Wanted group.

"To me, he sounds like he is an underdeveloped adult. He may be about 45 years of age. He seems like he has received only an elementary school-level education. Hope this helps!"

Thursday at 3:05pm

H.C.Mounsell

H.C.Mounsell posted a new reply in the topic I am Publishing my First Novel and Serious Critiques Would Be Greatly Appreciated in the Critiques Wanted group.

"Please only post serious critiques."

Thursday at 3:03pm

writeratheart31

writeratheart31 created the topic My first serious attempt at writing a publishable novel, and would like some feedback. in the Critiques Wanted group

Thursday at 12:27pm

writeratheart31

writeratheart31 joined the Critiques Wanted group.

Thursday at 12:20pm

H.C.Mounsell

H.C.Mounsell created the topic I am Publishing my First Novel and Serious Critiques Would Be Greatly Appreciated in the Critiques Wanted group

Thursday at 11:06am

HourglassThorne

HourglassThorne created the topic Seeking Critique on my Villanelle Poem in the Critiques Wanted group

Thursday at 9:19am

FlorescentSummerLights

FlorescentSummerLights created the topic Please Give Me Feedback on My Simple Poem! in the Critiques Wanted group

Thursday at 9:06am

EdynOnFire

EdynOnFire submitted the story The Epiphany (Working title!)Mature to the Critiques Wanted group.

Thursday at 1:26am

WolvenMoon

WolvenMoon submitted the story Spirit Stallion of Cimarron 2 to the Critiques Wanted group.

Thursday at 12:13am

WolvenMoon

WolvenMoon submitted the exercise Alder to the Critiques Wanted group.

Thursday at 12:09am

WolvenMoon

WolvenMoon removed the exercise Alder from the Critiques Wanted group.

Thursday at 12:09am

4 days ago

KarmaBennett

KarmaBennett posted the chapter 4.2 Just Another Loser Like Me in the story Dreaming of EveMature

Wednesday at 11:20am

HourglassThorne

HourglassThorne joined the Critiques Wanted group.

Wednesday at 9:16am

5 days ago

KarmaBennett

KarmaBennett created the topic How old would you guess this character is? in the Critiques Wanted group

Tuesday at 3:06pm

KarmaBennett

KarmaBennett submitted the story Dreaming of EveMature to the Critiques Wanted group.

Tuesday at 3:01pm

KarmaBennett

KarmaBennett removed the story Dreaming of EveMature from the Critiques Wanted group.

Tuesday at 3:01pm

KarmaBennett

KarmaBennett posted the chapter 4.1 One I Could Take in A Fight in the story Dreaming of EveMature

Tuesday at 3:00pm

RachaelRunes

RachaelRunes submitted the poem The Same Sick Stories to the Critiques Wanted group.

Tuesday at 9:31am

6 days ago

JeanneAntoinetteDoyle

JeanneAntoinetteDoyle submitted the story KoC ~ Knights of Concordia to the Critiques Wanted group.

Monday at 10:54pm

JeanneAntoinetteDoyle

JeanneAntoinetteDoyle created the topic Critiques wanted for "KoC ~ Knights Of Concordia" in the Critiques Wanted group

Monday at 10:53pm

JeanneAntoinetteDoyle

JeanneAntoinetteDoyle joined the Critiques Wanted group.

Monday at 10:41pm

Adam_Ward

Adam_Ward posted the chapter (P1) Chapter Seven: Sometimes I wonder who he's picturing in the story From the OvertureMature

Monday at 8:06am

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