Collaborative Corner

Hey everyone :),
I am writing a story,"You dont find many pale,sparkely skinned 15 year old girls" and its a romance,super natural story.I have gotten high ratings and I want to continue the story and Im looking for a writer who has any ideas for the next chapter!:) Feel free to just add onto the story,I'd love to read it and I appreciate any feedback,comments or rating on what Ive already written.Thanks you guys!
~~~chesapeakechic~~~

Hiya,
I checked out your story part from a few gramma mistakes I thought it was a great opening. Like how the characters are very different such as the twins especially Leighton she seems like a pretty cool character to write for.

Have you got any ideas for the next chapter? Is there a twist working with the twins finding other vampires for the Vulgari to kill?

@Fitzy Im so happy you looked at it :) Thanks for the praise!!The next chapter could really be up to anything you can imagine although I like your idea.Im thinking that maybe Rachel thinks that Christian betrayed her (because of the note at the end) but really he was framed?Im hoping I can mold the story so that Rachel and Christian stay together-i love them both so much!As for Leighton,im not quite sure what will happen with her.Maybe her bubbley personality is really just a cover.Underneath it all maybe she is really...dare I say it...evil?Lol!Thanks again for checking it out,it really means a lot to me!

@Fitzy Hola again ;) Just wondering are YOU interested in writing the next chapter?

Sorry this is short but if I did then I'd like to write for Leighton? Let me knw and I'll write sommit later =)

@Fitzy Yes that would be great!Im so exited to read it :D THANKS!
~~~Chesapeakechic~~~

Hiya yeah was maybe thinking Alexander could be the son of Xavier? Are they 15 the twins? Thinking something along the lines of Alex used her to get to her parents maybe they have history like they were all childhood friends? But he betrayed them? Christian doesn't know that Alex has still got a hold of Leighton so that's kept secret...

Thinking that maybe next chapter Christian goes and explains to Rachel has she was mistaken about the note or something. Then thinking maybe school or something. Just throwing some ideas out there... :-)

Also, I left funnywriter a comment with this link and see if she wants to write a comment to collob with us. I wanna write for Leighton pleasee.

@Fitzy wow!Thats really well thought out!haha :).I LOOOVVVEEE the alexander is the son of Xavier idea!Thats genius!Xavier being childhood freinds w/ Leigh and Christians parents is amazinggg!Love it!To answer your question,Yes,Leighton and Chirstian (and Rachel-obvs.) are all 15.Am i misunderstood that Alexander actually HAS HOLD of Leighton?What do you mean by that?(sorry,its probably a stupid question).IMPO,Christian should definetly explaim that the note was a misunderstanding to Rachel (i think they are just too cute together!!<3).Thankyou for all the AWESOME ideas Fitzy,your genuis!You dont know how happy/exited/phyched i am about them!:)
thanks again!,
~~~Chesapeakechic~~~
(i think you writing in Leightons POV was a great idea :D!

Hey. Hope you dont mind me joining in. I really love the story and I want to add a chapter but I dont really have any ideas. It would be great if you could 'inspire' me so I could add a little of my own imagination!

@funnywiter90 I'd love for you to join in!I really like your writing-i think you,Fitzy an I could make a stellar collab group :).In the comments above,Fitzy had explained some ideas for an upcoming chapter-check those out.:) One of them is about a character named Xavier (of the Vulgari clan) and Leighton's/Christian's parents being childhood freinds with each other.Im trying to elaborate on that idea,such as (lets call L. and C.'s parents Ezra and Matilda),Xavier being cruel to each of them which made Ezra and Matilda become childhood freinds.Im going to keep brainstorming and will update ypu and Fitzy soon :).
~~~Chesapeakechic~~~

I mean is Leighton has a secret that only Alex knows about and because of what the secret is she doesn't want anyone to know. 'POV' ? Does that mean I am Leighton character?

Glad you used the link @funnywriter90

Sounds good so far your brainstorming =)

@Fitzy :About Leightons secret-Ooohhh how about blackmail?The Vulgari could influence her to do some pretty nasty stuff the Rachel.Maybe Leighton lies to her (Rachel) about Christian.You know how the first night Christian and Rachel was alone at C. and L.'s house and Leighton ran upsatirs to let them talk alone?Possibly Leighton tells Rachel that Christian was lying about the Vulgari killing their parents and that the Vulgari really are good people and Christian's the bad guy.Just an idea :).

When i said that you writing in leightons POV was a good match i meant that you writing in her perspective was a nice choice.I think it suits you.As a sidenote,funnywriter90 IS going to write with us :D.BTW,i loved all your ideas!!
~~~Chesapeakechic~~~

My rough idea was maybe when she was 11 she attacked humans and Alexander was the one to help her without telling anyone else. She deeply regreats it and doesn't want anyone to knw.

Right yeah she's doing the secert job on the side =) Yeah that could work also Leighton and Rachel.

Okay then cools happy to write for her! Great should be good then

@Fitzy The human attack idea is cool but wpuld it be big enough to make her a slave to the Vulgari?Its defs an idea though ;) I appreciate ur ideas and support!
~~~Chesapeakechic~~~

No this is the reason Alex has the hold on her because he knows that she attacked humans and was able to help her come back to her senses.

Alex is the son of Xavier right? So maybe Xavier found out and now using her. Oh in my chapt I kept meantioning how Rach had something about her, I'm not sure what either a power that the Vulgari clan need to kill of or an item that only Rachel can controll to use against them? We've mentioned how they've been killing vampires maybe they have something unique about them?

@Fitzy I see,thnx for the explaination :).Yes,Alex IS the son of Xavier.Maybe Rachel could have a power like the vamps in Twilight.How about....flight,hypnosis,controling the elements,controling animals,flight/levitation,being able to scale walls,reading minds,controling others emotions,seeing the future,etc.Any of those would be pretty sick,i think :).They is the Vulgari,correct?If it is i have a list of powers for them too (i had another chapter i was going to post on my first post but decided aginst it...) if you want to see it.

Yeah just see how it goes and will show her the other side of her dark personality throughout the story with her having to do other jobs, whiles still trying to cope being acting normal with C and Rach.
Was thinking that the twins have some sort of connection like they are able to sense feeling or things of each other when they touch...
Maybe seeing the things and sometimes elements? Hmm up to you really it's your character.

Who is @funnywriter90 writing for? Are you sharing Rachel or writing for Christian? Just wondering that's all.

ALSO! I'm moving this Fri to Ireland as I have job other there so you will have to bare with me commenting and writing any chapters. But you pair go a head and comment write chapters and i'll take a look next week when I can. =)

I think Leighton doing "jobs" for the Vulgari is a great spine for the plot!:) The twons connection could be cool,how about they can eacg read each others emotions?Im not sure who funnywriter90 is writing for but i will ask.Good luck with your move!!
~~~Chesapeakechic~~~

@Fitzy I think Leighton's dark personaloty could lay a great spine for the plot.I think The twins being able to read each others emotions would be cool.I will ask who funnywriter90 is writing for...good luck with your move!;)
~~~Chesapeakechic~~~