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dancingshoes14

One Writer for Forest Fantasy Kingdom.

Posted by dancingshoes14 on May 12, 2012

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dancingshoes14
posted May 12, 2012
I posted a topic on this a while ago, but the person I was going to write it with has had their account deactivated, so I thought I'd post it again. I'm looking for one writer to play a boy, that possibly leads to romance. There are still some blanks to be decided if someone wants to take it up with me. If no-one's interested, I'll start it as a solo. :)

Set in the present day, a group of friends go into the forest camping and play a prank on one of the girls by leaving her with only her rucksack and going to set up camp somewhere else. The girl is physically strong, but emotionally quite weak, however the group aren't aware as it's never come up in conversation.

After a few days of endless walking in a daze, she comes to her senses and starts to look after herself better. Little did she know, she was being followed by a boy. (side note: the boy could be a mythical creature or not.) The boy places things that will help her (eg. berry bushes, streams) and she carries on walking. After subconsciously following a trail set down, she comes across a clearing. It's here that the boy reveals himself. He says he's from a kingdom full of different species of mythical creatures.

At her choice, he leads her to it, where he also reveals that she is a descendant of the king. She stays there and learns their ways - practicing how to use a sword and learning which plants are safe to eat etc.

Everyone in the kingdom welcomes her as a heir to the throne, apart from one type of creature (yet to be decided) which is planning her assassination.

All the way through, the boy is by her side, helping her. A strong bond forms between them - possibly leading to romance.
Shally16
Shally16
posted May 12, 2012
Oh, sounds fun. I'll join! :-)
dancingshoes14
dancingshoes14
posted May 13, 2012
Yay! do you want the boy to be a mythical creature or human? My first thought was that he could be half-human half-bird, but you can change it if you like :)

Another thing that I forgot to mention was that the kingdom was originally going to be, kind of.. old-fashioned creatures, like fairies and elves etc. and the type of creature planning her assassination would be a modern one. We can change it if you don't like it though. :)
dancingshoes14
dancingshoes14
posted May 13, 2012
Ooh, just had an idea! :P How about, if the boy is a half-human half-bird, it's his species that wants to assassinate her, but he's an outcast trying to protect her! :)
Shally16
Shally16
posted May 13, 2012
Oh yeah, I like that! :-)
dancingshoes14
dancingshoes14
posted May 15, 2012
cool! Sorry I haven't been on much, I have my R.E GCSE on Thursday and I'm revising like mad! Do you want to put up your bio? :D
Shally16
Shally16
posted May 15, 2012
Hope this works. Tell me if I need to change anything.

Name: Seraphim, or Seth for short
Age: 18
Appearance: longish chestnut brown hair that is slightly curly and purple eyes. Although he looks normal, his nose is long and pointy, kind of like a beak. You can only see his brilliant purple wings and bird feet if you belong to the kingdom, therefore helping him to blend in with humans.
Personality: His personality changes, and even he doesn't know how he will react at times. He can be dark and mysterious, or bright and open, or a strange mix of both.
Bio: He was born and raise in a little town outside of the kingdom. Because his species is not a 'classical' mythology creature, they were pushed to the outskirts, therefore having limited contact with the king, and the kingdom itself. Because of this fact, most of his species despises the king and wishes someone else was in charge. But his mother and father were both loyal to the king, and raised him as such. He was about two years old when the princess was born, and about three when she was kidnapped. He always felt sad for the princess, knowing she would be raids not knowing her true identity, so he took a job at the castle and quickly raised through the ranks, soon becoming one of the kings most trusted official. Due to this fact, many of his species treat him as an outcast.
dancingshoes14
dancingshoes14
posted May 19, 2012
That's brilliant! Again, sorry I haven't commented sooner, is had my exam and end-of-year tests are coming up soon too D: here's mine:

Name: Aurora (or Rory) Chambers, though raised with the surname 'Smith' Outsid the kingdom.
Age: 17
Appearance: Shoulder length, heavily layered, copper/ginger hair, emerald eyes, defined facial features, tall (though shorter that Seraphim), slim.
Personality: Emotionally weak, but this grows stronger over time, kind, very loyal, sometimes sarcastic, quite blunt, patient.
Bio: Princess of the kingdom. She was kidnapped when she was one, and raised outside of the kingdom. No-one knows why, but nobody was as brave as to save her.

:D I thought we could start it as Rory wandering through the forest in a daze, the first chapter, and the second as Seth finding and watching her, then the next couple as she snaps out of it. Okay?
Shally16
Shally16
posted May 20, 2012
Yeah, that sounds great! :-)
dancingshoes14
dancingshoes14
posted May 20, 2012
@accioheadphones That's okay! I'm sorry too! XD No one I know has ever had there account deactivated so I didn't know if it was permanent :)

@Shally16 Cool! I'm meant to be doing homework at the moment, but it shouldn't take too long - I'll try to post it today, but do you have any ideas for a title? I'm really bad at them :P
Shally16
Shally16
posted May 20, 2012
Hm...

The Lost Princess? No, that sounds stupid...

Lost in the Forest? No...

Lol, I'm not good with titles either, as you can see...

What about just naming it the name of the kingdom?
Shally16
Shally16
posted May 20, 2012
Oh, what about Daughter of the King?

Or just Forest Fantasy.
dancingshoes14
dancingshoes14
posted May 21, 2012
Ooh, I like Daughter of the King! That's my fave so far, besides, we can always change it partway if we don't like it :) I'll start it tomorrow.
dancingshoes14
dancingshoes14
posted May 22, 2012
There you go! Sorry my chapters a bit short! :)

http://www.protagonize.com/story/daughter-of-the-king

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