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right... just a question... can you get cancer from a fire?

I wish I was a doctor right about now.

Looks like this requires research.

Ok I don't think you can get cancer from fire but there are some side affects of smoke inhalation and stuff... carbon monoxide poisoning and stuff... check out these links and maybe we can find some interesting stuff. Ill get to work on the epic fire asap.

Causes of harm: http://www.emedicinehealth.com/smoke_inhalation/page2_em.htm
Symptoms: http://www.emedicinehealth.com/smoke_inhalation/page3_em.htm
Medical treatments: http://www.emedicinehealth.com/smoke_inhalation/page7_em.htm

I was also thinking both daniel and lionel could end up in the hospital, in the same room. The rescuer and the victim. Setup for a nice conversation... but that'll be up to whoever does that chapter.

And then one of them dies. That would be so epic.

Don't get started too soon, though. Let's have a few chapters beforehand, then the fire, since the fire is basically the almost-the-end.

Ok gotcha :)

It's up! Hope you like! I have a way to make things happy and stuff if we need to. If Claudia wouldn;t have tried to make contact (i figured she'd try.) let me know and I can think of something else.

Yeah, that sounds great. I'll try to work on something.

You guys getting busy I guess? It's been a while.

Thankfully for me, my exams are over with, and the school year in general.

Yeah I just had a bunch of my exams... I'm not up next am I?

Nah, it's Shally. She hasn't been on in a while.

We can't let this die after getting so far.

I agree.

It's been too long, guys, and now I actually am thinking of just abandoning this. It's summer, and if you guys are heading out and doing your thing, then I'm going to do mine.

Agh, I'm sorry!

I was grounded for a while (long story, I don't mind telling if you wanna hear, but too lazy to type it all out right now, lol) and then I was really busy. But everything's slowed down now, so I can write again. (yay!)

Anyways, I missed y'all and I'm glad to be back. You guys are probably my two bestest buddies here on Protag, and I felt the most horrible letting you guys down. I hope you can forgive me. *gives sweet little puppy dog eyes look*

Good doggie *pets* . I haven't heard anything from SW in a long time, and I'm not sure if he's still unboard, but he should be.

I know it's short, but is there anything I should change/add?

Well, as much as I like it short and sweet, it's kind of hard to make a follow-up to since Lionel isn't in that scene anymore. Also, you made a mistake in part of the "I don't him leaving" sentence which should be "I don't want him leaving". Just an FYI.

Also, Lionel has quite a few of the "Shiz is going down" chapters, and there really isn't much I can do to live up to that.

Yeah, I wasn't sure how well Lionel turned out, but I just went with it. You could just write about what Lionel did after Claudia hung up, and then starwars can write Daniel and Claudia's conversation.

He's been off for a while, and I'm not sure if he'll be back, but I'll get started soon enough.