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Catching bullets... Any ideas?

Catching bullets... Any ideas?
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posted Feb 4 by JSimmons
well, who else isnt normal? because so far, you seem to have only described the girl, Asil as not normal, though I guess someone must have stopped time.
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posted Feb 4 by JSimmons
where you could go from there is, have the boys react, make a bad guy, see who was trying to assassinate the boys and try to stop them from doing it again, get captured, escape, chase scenes, fight scenes, hidden HQs, gadgets. I could go on...

Basically, this has the potential for a full blown action story, also has the potential for some romance, seeing as she has the choice of 5, count them; 5, boys to fall for over the course of the story.

you COULD also turn this into a collab, I know some boys who would be probably glad to take the parts, and I know I'd take one, you'd get to be Asil of course.

These are all just suggestions you dont have to follow any of them, particularly the last one, the dangers of a collab is the unpredictability of it, you never quite know quite what the other authors want to do with the story.
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posted Feb 4 by Alex_Walker
I had other plans for this story but I didn't type all of it up. There is an organization called Bloodstone who specialize in murder. Kind of a mafia with a head boss that has a problem with another organization called Midnight Haven. (good) Both are trying to recruit those who develop unique traits/ powers that can be used in overthrowing the other. Bloodstone is making a drug which allows the user to become psychic. Doing so raises criminal activity in the huge city of Riviandorth. The drug is called Lavina Requiem. After the drug is used for a long periods of time it causes the user to mentally fall apart. This also causes killing sprees. A drug with a costly effect and very expensive. Midnight Haven consists of naturally talented and gifted people, those often referred to as freaks of nature. This place acts as a home, workplace, and training grounds to develop and control their powers. A basic Yin and yang.

Asil, like I said before has "superhuman" reflexes and senses which qualifies her for recruitment. The 5 boys belong to Midnight Haven and are trying to recruit her.... thus the "freezing of time" ability belongs to one of the boys and "memory replacement" belongs to another.
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posted Feb 4 by JSimmons
hmm, okay. all that would have been helpful to know before you asked for help.
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posted Feb 4 by JSimmons
Were any of my suggestions helpful?
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posted Feb 4 by Alex_Walker
yes actually, I never went into detail about the main plot or the problems, all I had was a rough outline of what I wanted to happen in the beginning. I never thought of those possible paths I could take. I guess I was a little narrow minded on this one. Thank you. :D
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posted Feb 4 by JSimmons
Your welcome, I'm glad to help with anything else, just contact me on my profile.

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