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collab between Stargazer and myself
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A sci fi adventure.

General gist. A girl kidnapped by aliens to be come a slave for their prince.
Alright, so what shall we start with? Her capture? Are we doing first person or third? If first, which character do you want to be? The girl or the prince? :D
I wanna be the prince, personally, just write better for guys I think. My female characters seem, weak. Lets start with her capture. The prince will observe the auction, though he wont deal with the buying personally.
First or third doesn't matter to me. Ill prolly end.up with first, I tend to veer that way automatically.
Rightyho. We need to decide what the 'aliens' look like, but i'll start writing now.
I'm thinking humanoid, of course. Other than that, not sure.
Ok, well do you mind if I just make it up and then we can change later if needs be?
Have her captured by humans. The Alien Appeasement agency or something.
Sure. Do what you like. I'm really just throwing out ideas for my own benifit :P
:P Oh but I've already started! Have a look and see if you like. If not I'll change it. :D

A sharp grating noise filled the air, and Kayla covered her ears, gritting her teeth to pressure out the wailing. It was the sound of the catchers, the aliens who were sent to pick up the humans they thought were suitable for being slaves to the richest of their kind.Lately, they had just begun to catch any human they found wandering aroundafter dark. Kayla had been locked out of the compound because she had missed curfew, and so now she was hiding in the darkness of a recycling bin, desperate to stay and see her brother again. She was the only family he had, and he was hers. She held her breath as sounds of a scuffle could be heard outside her hiding place. There was a scream and Kayla winced, but still did not draw a breath. Only after it had gone silent did she let out the air inside her in a quiet whisp. The lid of the bin flew open, and blue eyes peered in at her. She stifled a scream as the eyes blinked. Then the alien opened it's mouth.
"This one."
The scream she had been holding burst from Kayla's lips as she thought of her brother being all alone in the compound.
"No, please, don't take me!" She cried as she was dragged from the bin by two of the aliens.
"Silence." The one who had found her whispered, and then she was carried away, still screaming, to their ship.
Ooh! Yes! Poor Kaylas brother though... what are we gonna do about him?
I was thinking he either gets captured or the prince brings him to Kayla, once he begin to like and respect her. If the first she could see him when she is attending the prince and could get all emotional and the prince notices and asks about him, then buys him so he can be with Kayla. :D
And what are we calling it? I'm posting now :D
Okay. I think I can see that fit into the scheme of things.

Uh title.
How about, temporarily: another world
http://www.protagonize.com/exercise/jsimmons-and-stargazer-team-up-title-pending-d
POSTED!!
I don't think its a good idea to have a title in all capitals...
I know haha I just did that because my keyboard doesn't play up on internet in capitals. Apparently it's something to do with explorer. I need firefox or something :D
Firefox is a free download. Just search mozilla firefox free download. That's what I use. Do you like my sugesstion? Ill post a chapter as soon as I get home from school.
Thanks, yeah I do and looking forward to it! :D
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