Hey guys, this story is a collaborative one that I haven't done much on but if you're interesting to read it, please do. Also, if you have an idea to what is going to happen next don't be afraid to write and extra chapter. Thanks

http://www.protagonize.com/story/inquiring-mind

http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-day-belongs-to-the-dead

My story is way out of my comfort zone so honest feedback would REALLY be appreciated, it's basically about zombies.
I never write about it so yeah
thanks :)

Hello!

This is actually an awesomeness collaborative exercise that needs more than just me and the clever person who started it! As it's very good for making you think without even having to try much as your given little thought energy shots...sorta!
Well anyway...
I enjoyed doing this and what i wrote made me smile so please let me know what you think and add to it!
http://www.protagonize.com/exercise/buzz-goes-the-word/118086

Laura :)

Hey!

http://www.protagonize.com/story/magique-journal

[Note: I don't know what's going on with the link for my story, but if it doesn't work I have a link on my page.]

I need feedback on this, please. Either good or bad. I don't mind.
I'm just working on to see how bad I'm with wirting about something related to history.

Thank you,
Wynona

There are so many comments and links here, I doubt this will actually make a difference by my putting this here, but it's worth a shot and I'd like some feedback. Please read this story about waking up and finding you don't know who you are.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/amnesia

"It's a pulp crime, still on the go - not even the first chapter is done. All help, ideas and (not too harsh) criticism welcomed! It's my first time so... BE NICE!!"
http://www.protagonize.com/story/blood-money

hey im new, i write funny non series stories, but i s'pose they could be series, il give you an idea, this story http://www.protagonize.com/story/shoenapped is about a shoes that holds secrets, weird, i know.

oh and i ment serious

Just write a really random thought that turned into a short moment between a knight and his commander...
please take a look and tell me what you think!
Thanks,
Laura May :)
http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-honest-soldier

I started this a long time ago---but I got busy and this got left behid. I'd love to really get it going. :O)

This is a (hopefully ;) fun way to practice writing, share creativity, and gain story ideas! :O)

You are given some sort of container.
Each container will have three diffrent objects* in it.
Your first job is to discribe the objects in the container, and the basic back-ground story of each object.
Your second job is to chose three new containers, and set the follow-up chapters accordingly.

*One of the three objects must be from the previous container (You cannot change the object in any way). You get to choose what the other objects are, but all three need to be connected in somehow (color, texture, back-ground, ect.)

Thanks! :O)

http://www.protagonize.com/story/whats-in-it

Like zombie fiction?

http://www.protagonize.com/story/to-whom-it-may-concern

Bon appetite :)

Spaced: A story about breaking free in a universe where you're shunned because of who you are. Oh and theres romance ;)

http://www.protagonize.com/story/spaced

This is a book i've been workin on for a while now
a high school humor/drama/romance thingie with shakespearean undertones
look for critiques, edits, ideas, anything
enjoy :)

http://www.protagonize.com/story/enter-romeo

I am looking for feedback, support, ANYTHING, for my story called Sophie, a drama/romance set in Wales.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/sophie-1

@nickb Would it be an idea to either remove the older posts or invert the comment order? It seems like the first posts in this will get loads of views and reviews and the one's this end of the job won't. Just an idea. :)

Here is the story I would like people to read and critique:

Warnings: Swearing, implied rape. I'd rate it 13+, would have read it at ten myself, that's when I came up with the original idea. If you think you can handle it please read!

http://www.protagonize.com/story/longtiere-of-the-rose

Blurb thingy: There is a twinkle in King's eye that I severely dislike. A gut-feeling, instinct, call it what you will but I don't like it. And then there's the man he brought with him: dark skinned, green eyed, golden haired with a smile that shouts mischief."

Kyiiko is the owner of a topside house, he saves kids and he's generally good. Then Joker comes along and pretty soon everything ends up on it's head.

@nickb
And now I feel like a noob :/ Haha thanks though!

~Cura :)

I have another story. I thought since it's so different (I hope) from my other one I would post it in a new comment.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/catching-majik

Rated suitable for all ages at the moment, not sure if it'll change, it might do.

Blurb thingy: Faevun is the daughter of K'trin-elisser and Andri-roxess. She has a happy life, two bests friends and elemental majik. What more could one girl need?

Then her mother is brutally murdered in a shocking plot against the crown. Faevun's life isn't just a bunch of happy memories anymore. The innocence and happiness of childhood isn't something that can just be given back. Life goes on. Friendship goes on. One day love might go on as well.

Hey guys,
So, I've been writing a story and I need some feedback on it. I plan to enter a writing competition in my school with this story and the deadline is soon approaching. I would really appreciated any opinions and critiques on it.
Thanks!

http://www.protagonize.com/story/to-condemn-the-dead

Will return the favour, just ask me to do so by posting a link to one of your works on my profile. Thanks again!