Hi well im writing a sci-fi+magical themed story set in medieval as well as modern times. Plz drop by and guide me about plot/characters . Speicially Character Focus.

Thanks

http://www.protagonize.com/story/elementisia

/Nyke

So, I've started writing a story which is the complete opposite of what I normally write. However I need to find a story line to go with. Can anybody read the first chapter and help me out?
http://www.protagonize.com/story/life-in-depth

@nickb
Reference to:

"Making sure to add link(s) to your posts..."
I am a "newbie."
How do you do above? I have "Eyes Wide Shut: An Enigma" posted (www.eyeswideshutanenigmaq.com

Thanks
dallas93444@verizon.net

I started this simply because I needed somewhere to put the prologue.
It's got a bit further than that now.
Read it please?

http://www.protagonize.com/story/summer-solstice

Here's a project I'm currently working on and am determined to finish someday :). Enjoy, and any feedback or comments would be helpful! I want this story to be the best it can.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-mirrormasters

It's the story of a girl named Leah, who discovers that she is from another world. Not only that, but she is royalty on her home planet and has a rare ability to utilize mirrors to travel through space and time. This world has been placed in danger from the actions of an evil witch and a power-hungry advisor to the King. Now, Leah must discover her past, unravel a prophecy, and solve the mystery of what has been set in motion on her home world before it's too late...

Ok, so I posted some stories and have tried to be patient and not chimed in on the "posting for comments" but after reading and commenting on several stories, I'm not seeing responses yet.

Angstfully, I ask, please look at what I have written. Here is a link to one story and there are a few others, all pretty random. Soon I will also begin to post the beginnings of a novel that I started.

http://www.protagonize.com/work/reflection-1

The story of two royals and the very different paths they take in life. One has loved the other his entire life. The other has been raised as a warrior and is stronger than any man.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/shadowlands-1/80051

The MOW Files.

This science fiction story is set in the distant future of our solar system where the government has developed into a corporatocracy and people are spilt into two differing 'classes': Members of MOW and Freelancers. There is also a shadowy crime syndicate known as The Organization, made up of Freelancers. The story revolves around Asuka Rackell, a privileged woman trained in the arts of espionage, and Gurn Tepper, a simple haulier from a more 'blue collar' background and their struggle to obtain, under duress, an item for The Organization.

Hey guys. This is a Five chaptered short story. I am aware that the story starts poor but i feel gets better as it goes along. I have recently updated it moments ago. Please tell me what you think i am ready to hear any feedback :)

http://www.protagonize.com/story/what-do-you-see

A new story I would really love some feedback on please :)

The young Callie-Rose Clarke is a police woman on her way to the top, but can she and her team find out the cause of Jack White's murder?
Is it as simple as it seems? Or is there a hidden secret waiting to be revealed?

http://www.protagonize.com/story/murky-depths

Hey, would love feedback on my story about the return of Satan and all it's beautiful goons (you'll need to read it to understand it (; )
Any comments would be appreciated, thanks!



Oh and here's the link:
http://www.protagonize.com/story/satans-children
Thanks again!

I would really love some feedback. I'm new here and a little nervous! It's a story about a boy with insomnia, who takes walks on the beach at night to help him sleep. One night, he hears this singing that mystifies him. His investigation into the music leads to some interesting discoveries.
http://www.protagonize.com/story/sea-song

Hey, I've just started a new story, and would love some feedback if anyones got the time. My grammar and spelling is pretty terrible, so there may be a few mistakes, but hopefully the storyline is okay. I've only written two chapters so far. It's about a girl called Jen, whose family was killed by werewolves.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/undecided-title

thanks x

Hello!

I actually have two stories!

http://www.protagonize.com/story/heavenly-complications
this one says it's a collab, but it's really not ;)

http://www.protagonize.com/story/opus-1-the-piano-and-the-amnesiac

Hope you like them! :)
-Cay xo)

Yeah , I really need feedback for this. So far I thinks its alright but I never know. Please just say a few constructive critisms or praises , it would be much aprreciated.
http://www.protagonize.com/story/remnants-fault

it's a short piece of writing which won't take up any more time than five minutes to read and critique - I'd love it if you read it. Five minutes of your time?

http://www.protagonize.com/work/her-3

i'd appreciate it loads

x

Hi, I have been looking for some feedback to my story "Zedilon: The Beginning of the Super Hero" which is about a boy who discovers he possesses a superpower that is needed to save the galaxy from an impending intergalactic disaster, although surviving proves to be tougher than he imagined.

Although don't be turned off if you are not interested in super heroes as that element really does not come in until later on in the story.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/zedilon-the-beginning-of-the-super-hero

Any help would be much appreciated, Thanks Marcus

Okay I've got three,

DIEEE!! is a collab where the goal is to kill the characters off, please join;

http://www.protagonize.com/story/dieee

We are the fry up and other song parodies

Pretty much self titluar.

http://www.protagonize.com/work/we-are-the-fryup-and-other-song-parodies

And the legend of rick a insane collab with a funny side

http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-legend-of-rick

the name of my story is Luke, I've written a very large amount, but it isn't nearly done yet, I would love some people to give me some helpful pointers. I could also really really use a girl's point of view on my story because several of the main characters are female and there are going to be relationships :P. So for the description of the story: Luke's parents were killed, his girlfriend's father beats her, he was forced to part with her to go learn his place as royalty in the castle, and now he is told he is the only one who has the power to save the world. If he wants to save the lives of many people and allow life as he knows it to continue then he must embark on a long journey with his girl friend to gather together the group that will help him save the world. Who are they? He doesn't know. Where will he find them? He doesn't know that either. Can he even save the world? That remains to be seen.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/luke check it out, please leave comments, and think about collaboration...especially if you happen to a girl for the aforementioned reasons. :D:D

P.S. I have a map of the world this is set in as well as character descriptions so email me at matt_schoch@hotmail.co.uk if you want them. :D.