I wrote this poem about unrequited love, it's personal to me but I would love some feedback as to whether it's any gud and especially sum constructive criticism plz thx guys

http://www.protagonize.com/story/desire

Greetings to all Protagonizers (gosh, I feel like an alien now.)
I'm "Looking for Feedback" on a new collab or mine. My very first role-play. Yippee! Called The Moon of Saturn, bout billions of years later on in the future. The sun is a red giant, everyone has to move to Titan, a moon of Saturn.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-moon-of-saturn

There's the link, there isn't much chapters, shouldn't take too long. Please post comments and ideas as well! In fact, join the collab if you can! Thank you! cherries~

Please read my story Thoughts On... I am eager for feedback

http://www.protagonize.com/story/thoughts-on

It is not exactly a story but a collection of rants that express my point of view

http://www.protagonize.com/story/lord-2

This is the second draft of what will hopefully end up as a published novel ... I'd welcome critique. Spook's already on the case, letting me know every typo I made and how to improve everything.

However, I have a rule: if you rate less than 5.0, you have to tell me why, so I can make it better. I'm not sending it to my agent until every chapter is 5.0-worthy, because I want it to be amazing.

I'm not saying that to make you rate it dishonestly. In fact, dishonest ratings would be very bad. But just so you know that I will be sad if people rate and don't comment... this is important to me.

Thanks :)

http://www.protagonize.com/story/odd-love

My current work in progress. I finally figured out how to update from a school computer so I added a whole slew of chapters today. It's a romance/fantasy sort of thing. I'm planning on including a lot of folk tales and mythological creatures.

I am writing a novel set 15 years in the future, about middle eastern rulers raising oil prices and starting a war, please read it and rate it, thanks

Russ

http://www.protagonize.com/story/world-war-iii-the-oil-war

I don't want you to give me feedback. I want writers for St. Contardo Ferrini: The Siege. http://www.protagonize.com/story/st-contardo-ferrini-the-siege

I'm not sure if the story is a little boring or interesting but I think it would be great with a little bit of tweaking and feed back.
Its a sorta supernatural modern day demon fantasy thing.
http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-last-defiance

http://www.protagonize.com/story/an-old-fool

Just something I came up with. Short and sweet. Just would like someone to read it.

Anyone interested in a Fan-Fiction story?
I've got a thread in the fan-fiction group, seeing if anyone would be interested in writing an Artemis Fowl story.

http://www.protagonize.com/group/fan-fiction/topic/1155

I've already got the basics of a plot worked out, but I've still got a few holes to fill in, and no real ending. (Which I would like to do. End it, that is. Not just go on for forever and a day.)

So if you might be interested in taking on another project (and happen to be a fan of Master Fowl) head on over to that topic, or just leave a message on my profile.

Looking for collabs or just some opinions.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/today-2

Also I promise it's awesome... honest.

Spy. Action. Political. just a chance to theoretically burn the politicians.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/no-title-yet-1

It's the one-sentence summary of a novel I'm working on. I'm working using Ingermanson's Snowflake Method, and I'll be posting more parts later. I'd like some opinions.

Huh, fingers crossed this works.
First is my current major work, featuring a cyborg named Silas. It's a bit of a space opera, and it's based on a short story that I wrote a few years back.
http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-flights-of-the-silver-orchid

The second is a collection of poems, only three up there right now, but there will hopefully soon be more. Constructive criticism is more than welcome.
http://www.protagonize.com/story/notebook-poetry

And lastly my 'other story'. Yes, it is a LoZ fanfic, but I'm enjoying it right now. I am also, however, stuck. I just can't get the next chapter to come. Contributions would be very much appreciated.
http://www.protagonize.com/story/i-saved-the-princess

I really need feedback on this story in my opinion its a little wooden, and mabey going to fast but otherwise I need an outside opinion. Please read , and give me feedback. I'll even be generouse enough to read something you need feedback on.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/lord-of-corruption

I have 2 stories that I'd like people to check out, if you guys have the time. I already put a few discussions topics about this in the Protag Pub and also the New Members groups. So you might've seen them around. Anyways, here are the links!

http://www.protagonize.com/story/phenomenal

When Aurora Zanderwood learns that she's a witch, she knew that she was going to be doing more in her life then just learning how to make spells. Follow her on her adventure as she enters the world of Wicca.


http://www.protagonize.com/story/destinys-forever

When Celeste Dawn Cruz moves from her home to North Carolina, she at first is heart broken for leaving her childhood best friend Elizabeth. But Celeste is not your normal girl. She's an enthusiast and always sticks out of the crowd. But when she meets Roy, she noticed that there's more to the world then just her way of thinking.

Hello. I'm new to this site, and I was hoping to get some feedback on the first segment I posted:

http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-villainous-visitor

I'm pretty new to writing, but I am working through the process of writing my first novel. I'm not even sure if I want to use this style of writing, but I want to know if people like it, and if it is still an appealing style to more adult age groups.

I just added a new chapter to my story Love Not At first Sight.
Its the fourth installment in the story.
I would love to have some feedback.
Thanx and here's the link.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/love-not-at-first-sight/63943

A story I wrote years before joining this site and posted all together so not many people read it.
http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-taste-of-blood
would be very greatful to get comments, ratings, thoughts...anything really.
Thanks,
Stargazer

This si a stor I'm currently working on called dreams, it's hard to describe but I hope people like it, it's like a rmance/fantasy/adventure thing with some sarcasm thrown in =)
http://www.protagonize.com/story/dreams-6