Please checdk out the beginning of my story "Silver lining" I'd appreciate it very much http://www.protagonize.com/story/silver-lining-1

I need some feedback on my story. I have put the beginning of my story online, but I can upload more.
http://www.protagonize.com/story/love-is-dangerous

Please can i get feed back on these two stories :) Thank you

http://www.protagonize.com/story/why-1

http://www.protagonize.com/story/traveller

:) "If if quiz's are quizzical what does that make tests?"

http://www.protagonize.com/story/her-cursed-slipper

summary/blurb:
My father was supposed to be KING. I was supposed to be the PRINCESS. Your father did NOTHING except get rid of him to take the throne." He shrugged."So? Bite me."--- a retelling of Cinderella.

i'm new. hi.

I'd appreciate if someone would give some feedback on Ch 1 of this story I want to start. Not sure how it's going to go from here but that's alright.

Selfless
Toby Reed, a 21 year old guy who recently lost both his parents and has adopted the mindset that he must focus on himself if he wants to accomplish his goals before his time is up on Earth. However, a guardian angel from Heaven has been sent to teach him otherwise, and that's where his journey begins.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/selfless

Can someone please collaborate on this story where you can Just add anything to the story:
http://www.protagonize.com/story/death-to-all-who-think-this-is-not-a-approprite-title
oh please rate/comment on this one:
http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-man-who-married-a-lamppost

Hello everyone :)
I haven't gotten much feedback for a long time. I've been commenting and rating other peoples' stuff like crazy, but I haven't gotten anything in return... so, if anyone wants to read this story:

http://www.protagonize.com/story/glances

then go ahead :) it involves marching band, mind-reading, and some sort of conspiracy. I'd enjoy some collaborations, considering the fact that I haven't added anything to it in so long.

another story I'd like to have collaborators on is this story:

http://www.protagonize.com/story/crime

It's a sci-fi dystopia story. TheEurakaCase already collaborated part of it with me, but now it's basically abandoned again. Anyone else is welcome, though, and feedback would be nice too!

Thank you so much if you do this, I'll read some of your stuff too if you read/ collab.

--Squip

Hey folks.
Kinda new to this sort of thing and really don't know how my writing compares to other people's... so any praise or criticism would be very welcome! :)

http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-girl-in-the-shadows

Thanks :)

Could i please get some feedback please on my story please.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/why-1/51028

Feedback on these would also be good :) thank you :).

http://www.protagonize.com/story/just-jump

http://www.protagonize.com/story/why-1

http://www.protagonize.com/story/traveller

just wonderin if anybody was interested in a zombie collab i already have one person but the more the merrier :
http://www.protagonize.com/story/zombalopcalypse

if the link didn;t work just put this in your browser bar.

yeah i would also like some feedback on this story
thnx

http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-currents

Hi,
I'm kinda young (if you class 3rd Year as young) I think to be writing seriously, but hey, I don't care. I enjoy it; so why not?
I've started writing two novels, and one is slightly longer than the other. I haven't finished either of them yet though.

The first one is called 'Ugly and The Beast', as for the title: it's kind of lame, but the story is better... I hope. http://www.protagonize.com/story/ugly-and-the-beast
Basically its about vampires, but I seriously didn't mean to copy Stephanie Meyer's Twilight Series, but I got writing... you know how these things go...

The second one is called 'Secret Agent' and is about exactly that... It's very adventurous, and once you get to chapter... 14, I think, it starts becoming slightly romantic, but it's typical teenage romance. Written by a teenager FOR teenagers. Basically the girl has grown up with all this agent stuff going on around her and then things get tricky when she is shot... You'll have to read it to find out more!!!
http://www.protagonize.com/story/secret-agent.

Please leave comments and rate, and constructive criticism please?

Thanks
Hanzyboo...x

http://www.protagonize.com/story/love-not-at-first-sight

I am a first timer on Protagonize. Please rate my story and let me know what needs to be done...
Thanks a lot!!

http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-tying-knots

http://www.protagonize.com/story/stare-into-the-sun

Please give feedback. :]

http://www.protagonize.com/story/when-lust-became-love

tell me what you think :D x

http://www.protagonize.com/story/according-too

I'm really bad at explaining stuff so why don't you just take a look. It's only 2 chapters so it won't take to much of your time.

Many Thanks,
Lady5Dilly
xx

http://www.protagonize.com/story/existence

It's one of my best stories (I think).. It's kind of long, but short chapters. And I'm not totally sure what's going on, because I haven't added anything in a long time, but it is about a future society after the apocalypse... and a conspiracy haha. IF YOU LIKE MYSTERY, THIS IS MYSTERIOUS. AND SUPERNATURAL! I really need collaborators, too, or else it'll probably be abandoned forever... :(

And as I said before, I'll read one of yours if you read one of mine :D and if you collaborate... I'll be your best friend!

Hi everyone....

I am posting the link of my story over here.....would appreciate it if I could receive some feedback on it...... Would be more than happy to receive criticism and comments on it.... hoping the story is liked!!!

http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-start-1

Enjoi..... :D