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posted Oct 23, 2009 by nickbPlus Member
UPDATE: Hey folks, I've closed this topic off since we now have the lovely Shameless Self Promotion group which can be used more effectively. Please check that out instead!



Just a note because I see lots of folks posting in this group looking for story feedback or collaborators - the easiest way to get feedback here is to make sure you include a link to the story you want folks to read.

Making sure to add link(s) to your posts makes everyone's lives a lot easier; if the links are there, people don't have to go digging in your profile to see what you're wanting feedback on.

Any other questions? Feel free to ask here.

Cheers,
-nick
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posted Oct 23, 2009 by Spockeh
World on Fire: WoF is a story about what would happen if the world fell prey to a rush of nuclear attacks on various nations. It, right now, is following the struggle of Jacen Smith as his makes his way through what was Washington DC. The story is open ended and anyone can join.

Link: http://www.protagonize.com/story/world-on-fire
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posted Oct 24, 2009 by Cardenia
My story is Alice Lovelle and so far it's just about a girl (Alice) who lives in the 1500s. Anyone can contribute to it, and I'd appreciate it if you did hehe :] It's my first story on here.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/alice-lovelle

~Cardenia
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posted Oct 25, 2009 by scythe
Dark Water is about basically a girl who wakes up in the middle of the ocean. And...I'm bad at describing things. Sorry. XD So here's the link.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/dark-water
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posted Oct 31, 2009 by Panda
hey
I'm new to all this so I was really hoping to get some feedback :)

This is about a girl named lottie- this is the blurb i wrote- Lottie was 2 when her mum died, she never really remember much about her but she always had Sammy. Lottie was 5 when Sammy died. A spiral of events throughout her troubled childhood and into her adult life lead to Lottie troubled and standing on the edge of a bridge with the man she used to think she could trust.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/lottie
Of course this is only the very beginning but I'd really like feedback so I know whether people like it

thank you
Jen
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posted Oct 31, 2009 by Shelby
http://www.protagonize.com/story/chicken-scratch

True story, inside and out. The only "fantasy" piece of it is the fact I write from Diamond's point of veiw... other than that, I've stuck to the facts.
My sister read it, and her response was "Wow! It's like you were there! How did you write that so well?" I said to her, "I just watched carefully. I knew I'd be writing something about them one day."


http://www.protagonize.com/story/stuck-with-you
Collabrative story about a girl and a guy who get stuck together, alone. At first they hate each other...
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posted Nov 2, 2009 by Danny
Hey people would love some feedback please.I know its short but I'm just testing this out first before i elaborate on it .

http://www.protagonize.com/story/why-1
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posted Nov 10, 2009 by SomebodysAngel
Hey,

I'm new and I'd like some feedback/someone to collaborate on my work. I only have the one chapter for now but I was hoping if I posted on here then it would get the ball rolling :)

I know its only early,but feedback would be greatly appreciated

Thanks :)

http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-lady-in-the-satin-dress
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posted Nov 14, 2009 by rlw666ACEOFHEARTS
http://www.protagonize.com/story/black-gives-way-to-bood
Tell me what you think

Thanks =D
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posted Nov 15, 2009 by WindxWater
It's about a magical realm that can only be reached by selling your soul to the devil.
I'm looking for both feedback and collaborators.
http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-house-of-the-devil
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posted Nov 20, 2009 by BrionyPro Member
Hey guys.

I feel like I'm shamelessly plugging, but I would appreciate your feedback as I'm trying to build a collection of poems to submit into the creative writing team at my Uni; the best collection gets put in the local literary magazine Tripod, which would be amazing.

So I humbly ask you to cast your eye over a few or even just one of the poems and tell me what you think.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/sheep-talk

Thank you!
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posted Nov 20, 2009 by Anna's
http://www.protagonize.com/story/those-blue-eyes

Its a personal project for me and an experiment so I would LOVE any feedback I can get =D

Its only the first chapter so far but It will become a full blow project.

xxx
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posted Nov 20, 2009 by Renee999
this is my story. it is about a female based society. somewhat based on the amazons, but different. there are five spirits and they are all women. please tell me what you think.


CLICK HERE FOR AWESOMENESS:

http://www.protagonize.com/story/island-of-fate
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posted Nov 23, 2009 by Hummingbird
Hey, this is my story called Terrified To Remember, Forbidden To forget. It's about a girl who's little sister goes missing and her and her dad have to look for her.

I would much love some feedback, thanks.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/terrified-to-remember-forbidden-to-forget

thank you :)

~Hummingbird~ xx
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posted Nov 25, 2009 by jait
All right. I'll leap into the fray here... Since there's been no rating nor comment on this story...
http://www.protagonize.com/story/fighting-shadows

The scene is adapted from the opening scene of a play-by-email rpg I used to run. Always thought it'd make a good story-opener...

Your thoughts?
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posted Nov 27, 2009 by LostinThoughts
Hey, my story will be about a special kind of person involved in the war in the after live. The sotry will play in both worlds and nothing has yet happened because i need to set the setting out first. then exiting stuff will happen.
jsut give some feedback about the writing style, and if you understand whats going on.
http://www.protagonize.com/story/portal

future chapters will be added soon.
thanks for anyone checking it out.
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posted Nov 28, 2009 by KatherineDahl
alot of my stories are old ones that i havent let go quite yet. but one im most intersted in still is my story Life without you So if you could read it and tell me what you think it'd be great.


Link::: http://www.protagonize.com/story/life-without-you
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posted Nov 29, 2009 by Bee.inpink.
Hey. I'd love some feedback as this is my first serious story. I haven't posted much, but i have big hopes for the rest.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/a-second-chance

Thanks

Bee. X
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posted Dec 13, 2009 by Xhaan
Love, Love - A romance novel about a girl and her decision between two very different relationships. Each chapter starts with a poem so if you're interested in poetry then you might like it!
Anyway, I need critique on this as I would like to get it published some time in the near future and need to fine-tune it...

Link: http://www.protagonize.com/story/love-love

Thanks!
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posted Dec 15, 2009 by lostmidtranslation
Oblivious,

It's 13 chapters in At the moment - "New boy, old girl. He's joining their school 6th form, and she's supposed to be signing them in. When he sees her, something hits him hard, but he doesn't know what it is, and she seems totally oblivious. When he summons up the courage to say hi, she finally notices him... but the fact she's a year older than him - and the fact they do totally different subjects means they never stood a chance, Right? Alternate POV, retelling events from both sides."

Link: http://www.protagonize.com/story/oblivious

Thankyouuu!!
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