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Teen fugitive story collab (open)

Teen fugitive story collab (open)
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I know its quick to jump to a title without describing the story however I hate it when I make a collab then i'm left without a title.

so this is what I have so far.

Those who run

Searching for the Truth

The Blamed

I dunno I don't feel any particular attachment to any of these titles

anyways heres what I have come up with well I have few ideas so bear with me.

Idea one
In a town athiest teens are getting picked on by just about anyone, who isn't them. Anyone who sympathises gets treated brutally to. One night they find themselves defending themselves from the a few drunken off duty police officers and a gun is pulled out. One of the officers the others are injured. No one know's who did it as they run away from the law.
(side note this is a personal view from me because of the horror stories i have heard about how athiests can be treated in the states. Not saying any of you are guilty of this nor am I saying this is limited to the states. It is however something I know is a problem in some places)

Idea two
our characters live near a military base, and one day tread across a site ( outside of military control) and see a horrific scene of blood burnt bodies. As quickly as they came upon the site they are seen near it, and are put to blame. Feeling that they have been set up they run. as they do, the law isn't the only one following them.

Idea three
They witness a murder done by a shady cop in a city ruled by gangs. They get noticed ,and they have to run, try to prove their innoecence and reveal the corruption in the cities law. ( least favourite idea.)

Idea four
A group of teens decide to throw thier lives aside for the good of the world, and rebel against all the things the government does wrong. While on this self sacrificial road they catch themselves in an underground movement, thats starting a rebellion. ( this country is maybe unstable, and needs to be changed under this repressive government) In this underground movement they find themselves getting into a fight, and kill a few officials. The rebellion leaves them high and dry while the law cracks down upon them.

How does this all sound?
I like most of these ideas, but i'm open to new ones as well. Lets make something truly amazing.
btw i'm in the middle exams next couple days so bear with me.
not bad!

any of the ideas would work for me... cant wait for you to get back so we can plan!
well i can sorta do some planning i got two exams today, and one tomorow and i'm done.

I'm not voting for three, to me three is hard to develope.
if i had to pick i'd want either 2 or 4... but like i said im fine with any.
yeah those are good options
I like number four
so two votes for number 4 alright.
I like idea 2
2 for 2

2 for 4

k.
hahaha we need a tie breaker chimera!
i am unfortunetly undecide for the moment.
Well then lets invite one more person lol :D
i have no idea who to invite.
flip a coin then :D
Change of mind...I'll go with number 4.
alright number four it is! So bio's and should we start with the getting into the rebellion, or jump into doing the mission for the rebels?

I'm good with either.
also I imagine the setting in a rather desert like country with a lot of sand. So its gonna be warm so dressing your character in a trenchcoat, and leather is just not believable. Well okay it gets cold at night so a duster could make sense or the cowboy sorta look maybe.


Marek Tassen
Age: 16
Appearance: Dirty blond hair, bright green eyes, slightly tanned skin. Stands at six feet. Is slim with clear muscle tone. Wears a black duster with a large orange fifteen sewed on the back, and the insignia of the rebels on the right shoulder ( Blue fist surrounded by red in a circle) Is quite faded and can only be seen under a careful watchful gaze from about five feet. Typically wears torn up Jeans, or shorts. Carries two pistols, and a climbing knife. a kinife with a large loop on the hilt to link a caribiner to.
Personality: Outgoing, confident, tries to be optimistic and keep everyone on track in a dark situation. Inside he is a little more cynical. Can be a little to trusting. Reckless, and acts before thinking.
History: Grew up in a middle class home, was taught to not distrust the current government, and resent them. Has always dreamed of brining round change. His father was killed when he attempted to forge a labour union in the construction industry at the age of 10. Mother had run a cafe that was run down by the government, and to keep it running had to let it get influenced by some gangs who later shot her when he was13 . Is the youngest of three siblings who made a living by joining the rebellion when he was 14. All of them are now working for the rebels, in different areas.
last edited Jan 26
we should probably start with them realizing how crappy the world is and joiing the rebellion first... or if you want we could do a "En media res" kinda thing where it starts out in the middle and then we can do some flashbacks... I'll work on a bio.
Lorelire Juxton
Age: 18
Appearance: Jet Black hair, Dark blue eyes, and brown skin. 6' 2'' with a wiry frame, but not over muscled. Wears a long-sleeved sand colored shirt that is belted at the waist but hangs down a little more. He also wears light thin pants underneath his shirt. This outfit is to protect against the wind and sand of the dessert.

Bell rang but ill come back and update this later...
well problem with that is Seinbon hang on i'm changing that name! Marek is sorta already part of the rebels as explined well maybe just his bothers If I change it up. But he already has a pretty good understandng the world sucks.
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