Alright I have been watching alot of bleach lately, and will I want to do a story. Now I usually like doing a fan fic which doesn't contradict the original story so I was thinking of having an expidtionary force stationed in the world of the living. This means that our soul reaper characters will probably not be seated officers. That doesn't mean they aren't at that level.

I am currently working on plot details but essaintly an strong hollows keep apearing in this town, they have already eaten two of the members of the expidtionary squad. They have tried to get reinforcements from the soul society but they were denied and told to hold on for the time being. These hollows seem to specialize in killing soul reapers btw.

As for the rest i'm still thinking something up, but that should be atleast tweny chapters of material.

Awesome! Tomorow when I get home from work, I will try to do details bios and stuff. still working on plot and stuff help would be aprciated.

That would be cool. Perhaps, but we would have to have a seriouse reason and way to explain how.

So I was thinking that as an intro the characters would be disguising themselves in Gigais that hide their Riatsu (spiritual pressure) Because the hollows are targeting them. As so they are trying to acclimatize to having to actually socialize and abide by behaviours of the world of the living. However in my second or third chapters I was thinking of adding an 12 year kid who could see hollows, and soul reaper forms.
(maybe is or could be connected to the hollows somehow)

how does this all sound so far?

Actual kid.

The one twelve year old?
thats a really good question.
I was forming that today and one of the ideas I liked to some degree was that the more these hollow eats soul reapers the stronger the kid gets. Hollows thart are not eating soul reapers are attracted to the kid. And thats why the soul reapers end up defending him.

Maybe the kid turns out to be the main enemy. He had lost his or her powers, and had set up plan to keep living. Which involved inject his or her life force into a child, and these hollows would be released and eat souls of soul reapers which would be delivered to the child until the child hits full strength, then he or she would remember everything.

Hmm not sure yet. The problem about the kid being a former enemy is it infringes on the actual story, but so does the soul reaper idea. But if the kid was a soul reaper he or she would have came from squad 12. If former enemy would be associated with aizen on some degree.

You mean Gin Ichimaru.?
In the aizen arc Gin happens to betray aizen and dies because he wanted to avenge something he did to rangiku in their past. Maybe I misunderstood/

Also do you know anyone else who would be interested in this?

should I post the story soon?

alright so this is probably the most relaible up to date characters current story line of the show/mang

http://bleach.wikia.com/wiki/Bleach_Wiki

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bleach_%28manga%29

this will help you with premise and some of the story line

I will also try to help

So basically there are three world/dimension the world of the living, the soul society, and Hueco mundo.

The world of the living is were people live until the die and thier souls are removed from thier body. From that point they have a chain hanging off them which is broken. Sometimes the chain erodes away and they become a hollow. were a empty circle will open in their chest. They also grow a white mask might and start resembling monsters they eat souls to continue surviving. Or a soul reaper will come along and send them to the soul society.

Note spirits and souls cannot be seen by ordinary people unless they have large amounts of spiritual pressure ( power) If somone can see souls, they probably won;t see soul reapers or hollows unless stronger amounts of spiritual pressure.

Soul society is a place were soul reapers live, and souls go to. if you do not have any spirritual pressure you will never go hungry. If you do well thats gonna suck because anyone who isn't a soul reaper lives outside of the Sieriete and unless your a member of central 46. and the soul reapers don't really care. Doesn;t mean you can't grow your own food and stuff.

Soul reapers have vast amounts of spiritual pressure and they all wield a Zanpakutou ( a katana that has three stages of release. Most soul reapers can;t even reach the second level of release. second release is called a shikai. Third release is called a bankai only the strongest of soul reapers are capable of such release) Their a thirteen division of soul reapers captains being the strongest and only ones that can use bankai. However in the story they are a few outside of title captain that have achieved bankai. ( we won't be going to that level to much later in the story)

heuco mundo
home of the hollows barren wasteland with crstalised trees and a forever dark sky with a moon. Unde the wasteland the crystalized trees hold up the waseland. This is called the forest of Menos' Menos are third strongest hollows that are not arrancars.

Arrancars are hollows with broken mask and zanpaktuo

Visoreds btw are soul reapers capable of forming a hollow mask (these are rare only the main character in the show and few others have this ability)

Soul reapers main job is to protect the world of the living, kill hollows bring souls to the soul society.

Soul reapers are also capable of using spells called kido, they have different levels and making one up would be hard, but I think somewhere you can find out all of the named kidos.

As for more detail on the releases of their zanpakutous the second release changes the shape of the sword, and will draw on spirit pressure to do cool things and have different abilities.

Also most sseated officers have the ability to do a flash step wich is basicallly Apexs power. But some hollows are able to see and stop such attacks.

I hope this helps

also if you want to watch the show

http://www.animefreak.tv/watch/bleach-episode-1-english-dubbed-online-free

that is the best site to watch it on.

http://www.mangafox.com/manga/bleach/

is a good place to read the story.