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Collaborative Idea - All welcome! :) Boarding School

Collaborative Idea - All welcome! :) Boarding School
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Setting : Private Boarding School in Devon, England
Scene : Old manor house, turned into a school, large grounds, secret passages, dungeon etc...
Students : 200
Characters : 6 - 10
Time Period : Present Day
Realism : Realistic (yet a bit thrilling, due to location)
School ages : 14-18

So, I was thinking about starting up a collaborative set in a high-end boarding school in England. It's students would either be very rich,clever (scholarships), musical (scholarship) or sporty (scholarships)

The range of characters could be quite diverse as many foreign students could come.

I was thinking about having around 10 main character, this could change depending on how many people want to join. Below are a few ideas for characters which you can take, adapt or ignore. :)

Note:
4th form = year 10. [age 14-15]
5th form = year 11 [age 15-16]
Lower 6th = year 12 [age 16-17]
Upper 6th = year 13 [age 17-18]

NAME: Penelope Thomason-Jones
AGE: 16
YEAR: 5th form
SCHOLARSHIP/RICH: Rich
PERSONALITY: Penelope is an only child, used to getting her own way. She is fairly self-centred and vain.
APPEARANCE: Long, thick brown hair. Rosy cheeks. Deep brown eyes.
FAMILY: Only child. Her father is a top business man in London. Mother housewife.
ORIGIN: Chelsea, London.

NAME: Skylar (Sky) Jackson
AGE: 17
YEAR: Lower 6th form
SCHOLARSHIP/RICH: Musical - Pianist/Singer
PERSONALITY: Sky tries hard in class, but she excels in music where she has already composed her own symphony. She is quiet and speaks through her music. She is a key member of the school musical.
APPEARANCE: Short blonde hair. Pale complexion. Green eyes.
FAMILY: Her mother is a dancer from Belarus. Her father is an English musician. Her twin brothers are two years older than her and both at university.
ORIGIN: York, Yorkshire.

NAME: Harold (Harry)Vincent-Cruz
AGE: 18
YEAR: Upper 6th form
SCHOLARSHIP/RICH: Rich + Sports scholar
PERSONALITY: Harry is a team player, he responds well to close friends but due to his popularity he only has a few, real friends. These few friends are people you'd not expect. He's cheeky and has character. He's loud and likeable.
APPEARANCE: Wind-blown brown hair. Brown eyes. Tanned skin.
FAMILY: His father lives in Dubai, his mother in Spain. They have split up. He has a younger sister who is currently at boarding school in Germany. He hasn't seen his father for 5 years, but he pays for his education.
ORIGIN: Mum - Spain. Dad - England. (Lived in 6 different countries)

NAME: Ethan Rose
AGE: 18
YEAR: Upper 6th form
SCHOLARSHIP/RICH: Clever scholar
PERSONALITY: Ethan is loud, un-sporty and extremely clever. He gets easily annoyed a people who cannot maintain an intelligent conversation but he has impeccable manners.He doesn't try hard - he doesn't need to. Which means he spends plenty of time socialising and gambling in the dungeon.
APPEARANCE: Short red hair. Blue eyes. Tanned skin.
FAMILY: His family lives in Connecticut. His father is a teacher and his mother a full-time mum to his 7 siblings.
ORIGIN: USA - Connecticut
Love to join this!


I'll be in 5th form with my own character:

Name: Freddie-Joe Compton
Age: 16
Year: 5th form
Rich: but also got 100% on his entrance exam which helped.
Appearance: tan skin, shaggy yet styled sandy blonde hair, chocolate-brown eyes, tall and lean, groomed and has a cute face, dimples are nearly always present due to his all-smiles attitude to life.
Personality: Extremely intelligent. dislikes sports but is good at them, loves compulsart academic subjects(ie; science and english). But has a passion for Food and textiles Tech. He's bisexual and his parents know this (much to their dismay). He's perky and intelligent but when put down his usually giddy personality freezes into a mopey sad one. He's popular and has many friends of both genders despite his sexuality.
Family: Mother, father and twin brother live in York. His father owns a private hospital and his mother is the director of a cosmetics company. His brother goes to another school which specialises in business.
Origin: Pure English.
last edited Nov 20, 2011
Awesome (Y) :) x
http://www.protagonize.com/story/dartmoor-manor-academy

Here's a link...x
Hey, this sounds cool. I was just wondering, what is the... Sort of, uh, plot of the story? Like, is it just going to be showing the students and their daily lives and interactions? Or is there some idea for where you want it to go? :)
I'd definitely like to join this one, I've always wanted to try an idea like this!
I don't really care about the storyline, I'll go with whatever everyone comes up with :D

NAME: Holli Charmonte.
AGE: 17
YEAR: 6th form
SCHOLARSHIP/RICH: Art/Music scholarship, rich dad
PERSONALITY: Stubborn, practical but gets excited easily.
APPEARANCE: Short, red hair, green eyes, pretty, but not in the extreme sense.
FAMILY: Father owns a billion dollar company in Simpany, New York. Step-Mother (recently acquired), one sister. complete opposite of Holli.
ORIGIN: New York, USA.


her sister did not get in to the school.
last edited Nov 21, 2011
I agree with Callie
its interesting but I want to know more about the plot.
I'd like to join.
Save me a spot!! I'll post my bio in about an hour or two.
Name: Alicia (Alice) Hollisen
Age: 16 going on 17
Year: lower 6th
Scholarship: music (singer,dancer)
Personality: bubbly little thing, draws people in around her which makes her very popular but she doesn't really have any friends. Total nerd at heart, always has a book in hand.
Appearance: short, short pale blonde hair (just long enough to put into spikey little pigtails), pale skin, bright silver eyes, gorgeous smile.
Family: youngest of 4, all brothers (law student, med student, business student), stay at home mother, father is top defense attorney in new york.
Origin: new york, new york
Name: Jack Simmons
Age: 17
Year: 6th
Scholarship: Well rounded
Personality: Easygoing, not particularly talkative, sort of introverted, brave and ideal
Appearance: Average height, slim build, black hair, emerald green eyes.
Family: Only child, his dad is a businessman with some high up connections, getting him into this school for cheap.
Origin: Los Angeles California
For plot:
It's a boarding school, with a high reputation, so there could be a scandal around it, or something gets stolen from it and a bunch of students try to get it back. Mostly i think it would be the ordinary drama that goes with school though. I don't go to boarding school, but I imagine that the drama is much worse than public highschool.
thought that would be coming from kiri but why not I need some time writing in a non fantasty realm.

Jarif Naring
Age:17
Upper sixth year
Filthy Rich
Personality: Surprisingly modest but has no clue what life is like for people who have to work to where there going. seems to be good at anything he tries. Avoids the few things he sucks at. Is pretty calm can get riled up to if pushed. He never has had to work for anything becuase he is rich , and is naturally talented to most things. People hate that about him. Is really friendly, but sometimes avoids people.
Appearance: Wavy golden blond hair reaching to about his eyeline. Gorgeous blue eyes, slim appearance with a light tone of muscles. Stands at five foot nine. Is lightly tanned. generally wears button up shirt with two undone by the neck, and jeans. Occasionally throws in a t shirt.
Family; Never stays still was born in canada but has visted many countries over the years. He decided to go to boarding school to have something stable in his life. Can speak alot of languages. Is younger than his older sister, older than a younger brother and sister.
Origin: His mother is Canadian, Father is British.
last edited Nov 20, 2011
Stole the name from Avatar? Nice bio! lets get writing this thing. Kiri, should we have a writing order? I don't like them... but i can deal if people write. If not, I will jump in out of turn. If there's no turns no problem, I can start a chapter right away
damnit
changing that now
I thought it would be more mystery from Kiri's part about the school having secret passages and dungeons and stuff. But I suppose we will have to wait for Kiri to find out.
How preppy is this school anyway?? Are we talking uniforms and stuff?? Cuz that's what boarding schools do right?? Make kids wear uniforms??
Already have a Jack too, keep it Jake, change the last name if you must,

as for the mystery, I can't think that far ahead, personally, but i think there will be some mystery, I was only thinking surface level, I don't really know what's going on.

I say yes for uniforms too, But this is a rich kid school, so they may have more leeway, or less, I dunno, but there are prolly very stylish uniforms, no sweater vests and plaid skirts here, I say nice suits, prolly pale colored to show off the money
why can't i think of an orginal name today?
There's no such thing as an original idea ;)
Not neccsarily true, you just have to have a wide enough imagination :D
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