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Thank you for the comments :) and thankyou Elo for the amendments, the chapter reads a little better now too.

("Hmph!")
("That wolfhound is over half my own size, so big and he will respond to any command I give him, but don't mistake him for a fool, Bloodwulf can think independently when needed.")

Bloodwulf is a black Irish Wolfhound with an odd, small red patch on the chin, now I must change my chapter slightly.
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(~In that case h'es obviously bigger than me~ Stowie purrss ~though I garentee I can climb faster, and think smarter, given I AM an intelegent feline~)

So erm... does anyone mind if I post form Stowie's point of view? Or Shall I get Rachael's?

(~There are are some Interesting smells in these wood~ Stowie remarks dryly...)
I think he caught whiff of Elf and Dragon....

I think he wants to try and tie Madaline and Sharonah into the story line without them having to confront the confrontational 'beaings' *giggles*

@Nos Brakken isn't wholely human? akak I think you gave him some more than natural abilities... I can't remember just quite and I have to get going so I cna't research. *pout*

:} Elorithryn {:
Telling you what Brakken is would be a major spoiler for my story and I'm not sure if I want to change it but I can tell you if you want...
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But h'es not human...I don't have to know what he is. Just that he's not human right now. If it comes out later, so be it. *grin*

(~Another odd one~ Stowie remarks caustically ~A real freak show this is turning out to be, frankly I'm concerned about Racahel's scent too. She doesn't smell right either, or at least diferent from what I'm used to her smelling like.~)

Any helpful hints on where to go from here? I'm sort of in a quandry... We've got a standoff between Garret and Brakken, with Racahel against a tree watching with interest... So either I write what she sees happen between the two, and I'd need Nos and Anna's help, or I have Stowie snort at them all an go wandering... Though perhaps Rachael might too....

*sigh I think we are all hungry. I'm presuming Garret hasn't eaten yet, and I garenteen we've got public and some police at the scene, maybe even a Row boat.

(Yes, a Boat! - Rachael looks over at the two men - i don't supose you two dangerous types could procure me a boat, and perhaps a lantern? I might as well see what I can wrestle from my beast or jurry rig for power so only me and those I want can get in...)

*sigh* She's always thinking of how to get back into the sky.

:} Elorithryn
I don't mind either way (stowie's or the confrontation) I'm always willing to help. Just let me know what you need. :]

("A boat and a Lantern?" he shakes his head. "And yes Elo I am freaking starving a nice human or three would do nicely right about now! Though if anyone does show up, police or otherwise. I call dibs first!" Licks his lips. "As for you Brakken, I won't harm your precious mutt, you on the other hand, I might be a bit more inclined to...test." Grins, cocking his head slightly.)

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@Nos and @Anna What would the two boys do if Rachael decides to walk between them?

(Nothing like playing Russian Roulet with someone elses gun - Rachael grins - besides you both are intent up eachother, Garret's hungery and there are other's about. I'd rather make sure no one got into my ship... Damn not being able to swim. - she turns to her author - WHY DID YOU DECIDE I COULDN'T SWIM?)

I think I need my hearing checked now...

@Moon - Your elves look like text book elves right? As in if Rachael has seen Lord of the Rings she'd recognize Sharonah as an Elf? (and she's erm, slighlty plump isn't she *Elo shakes her head* saddly Rachael might have to say something on that....)

@Summer How big is your Dragon, what would be Madaline and her dragon's reacton be to a naked woman covered in mud and a large feline?

(~So many interesting smeels~ Stowie remarks)
(They say curiosity killed the cat - Rachael sneers)
(~Yes and it's amazing you aren't dead yet~ Stowie responds)
(That's because I'm wolf - Rachael grins)

Enough you two, geash... *grin*
:} Elorithryn
If Rachael were to walk between Garret and Brakken? Hmm, Garret would probably stare darkly at Brakken and (while looking at him) tell her to move. Plus, since he's starving his eyes would shift completely crimson and his movement would become alot harder to see (because he's moving so fast; when he's starving he has a bit harder time controlling is abilities). Maybe even bare his fangs a bit too.

(Garret nods and crosses his arms, "If she weren't there I'd kill him, drain him dry, and kill his petty mutt too.")
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(I wouldn't stop there! - Rachael laughs - I do have Some survivial instincts)

(~That it up for debate~ Stowie interupts)

(Rachael galres at the cat - I am still alilve aren't I, besides Garret dear, my presence shouldn't stop you from doing what you need to do.)

Not to you Rach, but he is a gentleman, despite the fangs, and that my dear, stops him *elo rolls her eyes as Racahel raumphs*

Anyway I think the plan would be for her to pass between them, just because, as she contiues her original thought of moving into the woods and seeing who might be trying to board her ship. Either that or she follows Stowie who's decided to investigate some of the other odd smells about since he has no wish to tackle a canaine who is bigger than him.

:} Elorithryn
("I would tell Rachael to move or I will shoot through her and lodge a bullet in his brain before either of you could think. You could try drinking my blood vampire scum, but like I said, I've dealt with your kind... compared to them, you're nothing at all")

Er... ok well my laptop will no longer let me on so it will be very difficult for me to keep an eye on things but I'll try my hardest!
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(Rachael snorts - as I said before I'm ONLY passing between you two. What is it with males and testosterone? - she's grinnig though, enjoying the attention and contemplating how slow she'll walk between them and how much hip sway she's going to put into her walk)

(~And she complains about their testosterone?~ Stowie snorts)

:} Elorithryn
@Elo, Dosamus (the dragon) is large. she's about six foot but she's not full grown yet. I've no idea her wingspan cus i don't know what would be large enough to hold her and another person up. still working on tht part. um in reaction madeline would be intrigued and want to find out more so she'd prob just walk up and say hi but dosamus would kind of hang back. she's obvs follow madeline but wouldn't say anything if not necessary kind of like garret (i think. got to get them straight. i always get him and brakken mixed up)
Is anyone interested in Sharonah's take on all this?
("Voice it witch!" He shouts)

Garret chill...*shakes head* seriously....Go ahead moon, I'm interested to hear what an Elf would think of this curious mix of characters.
I think we could really build animosity between Garret and Sharonah with his refusal to stop calling her a witch.

"I'm an elf, you braindead !#^*%@@i" (Sharonah)
Yea cause I don't think he'll ever stop *grins* Uh-oh...*shakes head as Garret starts in*

("Elf?" he says sarcastically as he pretends to think "Nah, you look more like a pointy eared witch. Goody, goody to-shoes that sprinkles fairy dust on the world." He sneers grinning. "I . AM. A. VAMPIRE! So bite me!" Maniacally chuckles.)
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RACHAEL!

(What? - She looks at Elo midley - I was only going to bite him.)

@Moon of course I need your opninion... Somewhere up there about 2 of my posts ago I asked for it *grin* I'm not sure Sharonah is going to like Rachael much better than Garret, but...

(Well - Rachael eyes Sharonah - she is trust worthy, and a goody two shoes like Garret said, plus she might be able to help me fix my ship....)

SO that's going to be interesting. comparing Rachael's FB-100A with the Peacock *grin*

*giggles* What year did the exodus happen in the Bubble? I wonder if our universes are 'compatable'.... (or built off one another)

:} Elorithryn
When I wrote that, I was only referring to the enmity between Garret and Braaken. Sharonah would try to mediate the situation by trying to get them talking about their situations, where they came from, and what their goals are.

"Hey you two Heeeeeeeeeey!!!" Sharonah shouts, putting herself between them, with each one at arm's length.

" We're all in an unfamiliar situation here. Fighting won't get any of us anywhere. First off, I assume we all want to go home, wherever that might be. Don't you think it would be best if we all introduced ourselves, and said where we're from, and what we're doing here, of all places? To begin with, I know that this is the swamp outside New Orleans, in the Victorian era (we might want to come up with a specific year here). I come from a place far south of here, in the Amazonian River basin, where I live in an Elfen realm. My time period is the year 2010. I came here to search for my stupid nephew, who launched himself here on the tail of a very badly executed spell. My goal is to find him, and go home. Who's next?"
@Elo -
You said:

SO that's going to be interesting. comparing Rachael's FB-100A with the Peacock *grin*

*giggles* What year did the exodus happen in the Bubble? I wonder if our universes are 'compatible'.... (or built off one another)

Sharonah isn't from inside the bubble. She doesn't really have anything to do with the Peacock. Sharonah lives in the Elven Realm in 2010 where the Peacock eventually shows up. It's the basis where Captain Shalice might try to find out what happened to cause the destruction of her own Earth 165 years in Sharonah's future. Her realm is the one where Taurvantion shows up on the canopy, and was attacked by Sharonah's fellow elves until the Peacock showed up.

The Peacock's exodus happened in the year 2175, but Sharonah wouldn't have been part of that. Sharonah is from the 2010 time period.

On the upside, Sharonah can make parts with spells, as long as she knows what the part looks like. The downside is that the parts might function, but not the way Rachael intends them to function. Obviously we don't want the ship working any time soon, or Rachael would go home - end of story.
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(I'll take conjured fuel but not conjured parts - Rachael snorts - thank you very much...)
I need to see what they might have had available for Rachael to make part out of. She's very mechanically inclined...
(But some of her electrical patches - Michael laughs and then quickly exits the story when Elo glars at him.)

Hm... So since Rachael was born in 4000, she could vaery well be from a portion of the universe populated by that Exodus... Not that it'd ever come up but... *grin*

Gah Still need to write my chapter...

:} Elorithryn
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