-When to have it, and when to toss it
-Don’t have long prologues
-Descriptions must be relevant
-Variation. If it got in the way of plot, and is boring, toss it.
-Show VS Tell-- Show is awesome, detailed, and use SENSES! Sound, smell, taste
-Use environment to create depth.
-Get into the reader’s head >:)
-You don’t need to know every last detail.
-More spring for action sequences
-Want the reader to realize and think “Exactly!”
-Focus on characters immediate feelings and actions. If they are running, they are focusing what’s in front of them.
-DON’T WRITE TO IMPRESS ((No one cares how big your vocabulary is))
This next one was too short to put it's on page. Honestly, I was falling asleep in this panel, but I hope I get some points across!
It makes the world, more characters. Setup/ payoff
Don’t get carried away.